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first recordings of my absurd dreams...

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Created: 07/17 2007
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IN A DREAM ... Far-far a w a y

IN A DREAM FAR-FAR A W A Y

 

 

 

Red-gold is the color of my nails.
Gold as a thousand suns,

Constantly glowering in the infinite space.

Red as my burnt melting skin

From the suns’ ever flowing smiles.

There I am in my dream…

Laying down in the cool blue grasses,

As if melted in with the sandy-purpled dirt

And breathing in lush scents of periwinkle bubbles.

How do you shoot down a star

with just a bow and arrow?

Why, by clasping on a wish

to burst through the ever glow.

And watch as the star shatters,

and mists the devastating planet

With beautiful rays of desecrated wishes

There’s a owl hooting

Inside my ears ---

My mouth moves,

But I only hear hoo-hoots.”

Why must the wise be deaf-mutes?

I’m drowning in
black bottled-ink.

The lungs that breathe

Are ones I cannot keep

So the ink blots my breath

And slowly gathers strength in my life stream.

There’s a hard-core mask

stuck onto half my skinless face

It knocks hollow creases into my heart.

How could I have seen

only half the things

running by

with only one single eye?

I’m up in a twisted black gnarled tree,

- dangling feet and eating polka-dotted yellow ‘shrooms.

It doesn’t seem to bother me

that the entire world is greyed in ashes,

And I’m the only one happy - surviving - in bloom.

There I am again…

Watering a giant glass sunflower

With green oozing goo ---

It seems to be a mixture

Of fairy dust and bottled luck.

The sunflower grows ten folds

And I build a house with its clear-blue petals…

In it, my home is the moon.

I discover some chocolate chips

protruding from a framed da Vinci work.

I grasp and chow down on the chips and ponder

Why my hands and feet are backwards,

And I’ve got no sense of taste?

There’s a tinkling twitch in my teeth---

They fall out in thousands

And shatter upon my giant-stoned feet.

Who has gone and tore out all my greed?

 

Such absurd things (in them)
           Should I only dream

 

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On February 3rd 2008 alacran115 Said: 
alacran115 This poem is amazing, i have always been a bit distracted with thoughts of fantasy, and the same time demise. Reading your poem makes me feel like i am in my day-dream fantasy. It is really a great poem. Should write more poems based on your fantasy filled dreams, so that everyone gets a chance to experience.
On September 24th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang abit EXTREME??? TOO EXTREME.. obviously,, lol,, but then,, again,, it is a dream,, so i'm guessing it's oke for me to go overboard on such a structure... hmmmmmrr? ^x^#
On September 21st 2007 transgenic Said: 
transgenic This is amazing! I wrote one kind of similar called "Sweet Dreams," but it's nowhere near as awesome as yours!!
On August 22nd 2007 InvisibleFlame Said: 
InvisibleFlame Yup, definately the shroomz
On August 13th 2007 joabizz Said: 
joabizz I sware it's those shrooms...lol... I really enjoyed it..lol..
On August 13th 2007 amptone Said: 
amptone I like the way you used colors in this one
On August 13th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said: 
mazerthumpkin I'm not sure I understand what you are getting at, or if this has a purpose at all...some good questions though...
On July 31st 2007 chubb5 Said: 
chubb5 that all just went WAAAAY over my head. reminds me of some trippy... dream. OH I GET IT haha
On July 30th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: 
boomboxbingbam i still love it.
On July 29th 2007 venus111 Said: 
venus111 The text art is so stimulating. Really adds to the whole surreal sense of the poem. Great description and imagery. Enjoyable poem.
On July 26th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: 
boomboxbingbam ever~
On July 26th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: 
boomboxbingbam i think im obsessed with this poem. it's the best poem ever ever ever ever ever. ever. ...EVER!!!
On July 25th 2007 starriewitch Said: 
starriewitch I have to agree with everyone else,OMG! You're use of the English language, and of text are amazing. Very descriptive. I am in awe.
On July 24th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: 
thatbluewoman wow...just, WOW! [can't seem to find any words] left me speechless...!!!
On July 23rd 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: 
boomboxbingbam oops. forgot to rate it the other day. but i meant to. and last night i was thinking about this poem and i was like Oh-EM-GEE! i didn't rate it.
On July 21st 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: 
boomboxbingbam wow!! its very CoL0RFuL! i completely absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On July 19th 2007 alacran115 Said: 
alacran115 i have to say this a great poem. people sometimes don't understand the great value i give to the word great. lol.
On July 18th 2007 Darkrisky Said: 
Darkrisky first off i love the way you wrote it. secondly those are some crazy dreams! lol
On July 18th 2007 JoyousBug Said: 
JoyousBug Wow. You dreamed all of this? Quite an impressive poem. Great imagery... Love the text art
On July 18th 2007 AlexINTJ Said: 
AlexINTJ Good lord this is amazing!! wow, I love the imagery, and how such random things fit together. This is really impressive. I'm amazed...maybe I'll quiet smiling in awe in an hour or two....
On July 17th 2007 NightLifeGurl Said: 
NightLifeGurl wow creative and i love the whole structure, as well as the color scheming =]
On July 17th 2007 mrskritter Said: 
mrskritter I agree very creative and interesting
On July 17th 2007 Oddessy65 Said: 
Oddessy65 WOW! I love it! It made perfect sense to me, and I suppose that doesn't say a lot about how sane I (might be) am. lol... The font effects helped show the meanings of the words, the emotion better. All in all, this has to be my favorite poem I've read so far. It's excellent! *~xODDx~*
On July 17th 2007 California1516 Said: 
California1516 this is a creative and amazingly crazy weird exciting interesting poem..i love ur imagination!!!! great poem :D
On July 17th 2007 stics917 Said: 
stics917 dude at first i got lost due to my ADD but i really enjoyed it,its different and thats what makes it great