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first recordings of my absurd dreams...Rate this Poem
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IN A DREAM ... Far-far a w a y
IN A DREAM … FAR-FAR A W A Y
Red-gold is the color of my nails.
Gold as a thousand suns,
Red as my burnt melting skin
From the suns’ ever flowing smiles.
There I am in my dream…Laying down in the cool blue grasses,
As if melted in with the sandy-purpled dirtAnd breathing in lush scents of periwinkle bubbles.
How do you shoot down a starwith just a bow and arrow?
Why, by clasping on a wishto burst through the ever glow.
And watch as the star shatters,and mists the devastating planet
With beautiful rays of desecrated wishes…
There’s a owl hootingInside my ears ---
My mouth moves,But I only hear “hoo-hoots.” Why must the wise be deaf-mutes?
The lungs that breathe
Are ones I cannot keep…So the ink blots my breath
And slowly gathers strength in my life stream.
There’s a hard-core maskstuck onto half my skinless face…
It knocks hollow creases into my heart.
How could I have seenonly half the things
running by
with only one single eye?
I’m up in a twisted black gnarled tree,- dangling feet and eating polka-dotted yellow ‘shrooms.
It doesn’t seem to bother methat the entire world is greyed in ashes,
And I’m the only one happy - surviving - in bloom.
There I am again…Watering a giant glass sunflower
With green oozing goo ---It seems to be a mixture
Of fairy dust and bottled luck.
The sunflower grows ten folds
And I build a house with its clear-blue petals…In it, my home is the moon.
I discover some chocolate chips
protruding from a framed da Vinci work.
I grasp and chow down on the chips and ponder…Why my hands and feet are backwards,
And I’ve got no sense of taste?
There’s a tinkling twitch in my teeth---They fall out in thousands
And shatter upon my giant-stoned feet.Who has gone and tore out all my greed?
Such absurd things (in them)
Should I only dream…
| On February 3rd 2008 alacran115 Said: |
| On September 24th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
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| abit EXTREME??? TOO EXTREME.. obviously,, lol,, but then,, again,, it is a dream,, so i'm guessing it's oke for me to go overboard on such a structure... hmmmmmrr? ^x^# |
| On September 21st 2007 transgenic Said: |
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| This is amazing! I wrote one kind of similar called "Sweet Dreams," but it's nowhere near as awesome as yours!! |
| On August 22nd 2007 InvisibleFlame Said: |
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| Yup, definately the shroomz |
| On August 13th 2007 joabizz Said: |
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| I sware it's those shrooms...lol... I really enjoyed it..lol.. |
| On August 13th 2007 amptone Said: |
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| I like the way you used colors in this one |
| On August 13th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said: |
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| I'm not sure I understand what you are getting at, or if this has a purpose at all...some good questions though... |
| On July 31st 2007 chubb5 Said: |
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| that all just went WAAAAY over my head. reminds me of some trippy... dream. OH I GET IT haha |
| On July 30th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
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| i still love it. |
| On July 29th 2007 venus111 Said: |
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| The text art is so stimulating. Really adds to the whole surreal sense of the poem. Great description and imagery. Enjoyable poem. |
| On July 26th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
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| ever~
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| On July 26th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
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| i think im obsessed with this poem. it's the best poem ever ever ever ever ever. ever. ...EVER!!! |
| On July 25th 2007 starriewitch Said: |
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| I have to agree with everyone else,OMG! You're use of the English language, and of text are amazing. Very descriptive. I am in awe. |
| On July 24th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| wow...just, WOW! [can't seem to find any words] left me speechless...!!! |
| On July 23rd 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
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| oops. forgot to rate it the other day. but i meant to. and last night i was thinking about this poem and i was like Oh-EM-GEE! i didn't rate it. |
| On July 21st 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
| On July 19th 2007 alacran115 Said: |
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| i have to say this a great poem. people sometimes don't understand the great value i give to the word great. lol. |
| On July 18th 2007 Darkrisky Said: |
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| first off i love the way you wrote it. secondly those are some crazy dreams! lol |
| On July 18th 2007 JoyousBug Said: |
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| Wow. You dreamed all of this? Quite an impressive poem. Great imagery... Love the text art |
| On July 18th 2007 AlexINTJ Said: |
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| Good lord this is amazing!! wow, I love the imagery, and how such random things fit together. This is really impressive. I'm amazed...maybe I'll quiet smiling in awe in an hour or two.... |
| On July 17th 2007 NightLifeGurl Said: |
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| wow creative and i love the whole structure, as well as the color scheming =] |
| On July 17th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
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| I agree very creative and interesting
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| On July 17th 2007 Oddessy65 Said: |
| On July 17th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| this is a creative and amazingly crazy weird exciting interesting poem..i love ur imagination!!!! great poem :D |
| On July 17th 2007 stics917 Said: |
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| dude at first i got lost due to my ADD but i really enjoyed it,its different and thats what makes it great |


