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inspired by B2K commercials.. u know???Rate this Poem
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Created:
07/11 2007
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368
Category:
Anger
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kill me with ur depression |
SHUT UP! XD
A consuming desire
A fatuous courier
A voltage too propitious
AAAAUUUUURRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!
It gobbles and grumbles
It rumbles and roars
It trembles and tears
SHUT UP!!!
I'm starving like hell
My stomach aches with fury
And my mouth protrudes with drool
DAMN IT!!!!
I cower down in exhaustion
I hold tight to keep it in
I fight the goblins in destroying my humility
FUCK YOU!!!!!
I punch and grasp for air
My heart pounds - dumbfounded
And my head just twirls in toxicated dances
SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!!!!!
I can't prevent it
I have no choice or control
I give up and search for food
FUCKIN DAMNED...
My mouth waters and i do as the rumbling voices in my tummy tells me to do... finally
And of course, they always get their way...
To shut them up -
I must obey. XD
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
| FOOOOOOOOD! ahh! great poem. darn it! im HUNGRY now! P; |
| On August 13th 2007 amptone Said: |
| ha ha ha! You are adorable and your poetry is lighthearted unlike most on here!!!! |
| On July 17th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
| ahaha, this always happened to me in my third period class, science, which was before lunch, and my science teacher was the kind of person who'd, if you asked her a question related to science, she'd ramble on and on about that topic, which would lead to other discussions. so by the time she checked the clock, it'd already be ten minutes into lunch. my stomach would grumble and gurgle the WHOLE time (coz i'd always wake up late and never have time for a decent breakfast), and there was this guy i sat next to who i think would hear my stomach, but he wouldn't say anything about it. still, i took the precaution and sat allll the way at the edge of the table. :) |
| On July 12th 2007 cbewing Said: |
| lol, this was great! I loved it. |
| On July 12th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| Well, that was different....I kinda liked it though! |
| On July 11th 2007 TanyaCheri Said: |
| nice:) |
| On July 11th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| OMG....LMAO....I love it, it is crazy but I have been there before. I had to go to the poem section to vote on this...everytime I tried on your profile it logged me out. hmmmm. Anyway, awesome poem. |
| On July 11th 2007 Oddessy65 Said: |
| ha this makes me hungry... Love it, it's hilarious. |
| On July 11th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| lol..wow..that was interesting :) |
| On July 11th 2007 stics917 Said: |
| lol i laff...its lafftastical :] |
| On July 11th 2007 OreoCat Said: |
| hahaha, cute and funny, i like it =] |
| On July 11th 2007 KiddieWishes Said: |
| reminds me of vampires.[: vampires remind be of blood. blood reminds me of Blood+.  Vampire foods.[: haha |
| On July 11th 2007 crazkoala Said: |
| GAHAHAHA! thats great =) try a cold muskateer bar =) theyre grand. |
| On July 11th 2007 joabizz Said: |
| OMG! that was hilarious! funny funny! |
| On July 11th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| like this:::
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| On July 11th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
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| gawd,, i'm starving,, hey,, heeeey,, if u have food,, put some on here,,, lol,, lil pics,, lol,, u know how right? ^_~ |
