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for that particular guy; is this love?Rate this Poem
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Created on 6-15-07
There’s this fuzzy-numb-ringing rush…
Tingling from the tip of my toes
Up throughout my body
To the top ends of my ears
It’s not just my heart
Wringing and twisting and beating in a frenzy,
But my whole body pulsating
My whole being throbbing inside-out
My eyes dilate
A smile slips out at the edges of my lips
My fingers tremble
A series of waves erupt down my skin
My knees weaken
A wonderful chill runs through my spine
I know only this feeling…
When I see him
When I hear him
When I touch him
Please Login to post comments| On June 28th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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i would have to say,, i've only felt this about twice in my life,, so ,, right now,,, "that" guy is quite near,,,, i just hope we can work it out,,,, better than the last,,, =) |
| On June 19th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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I really like this one a lot! :D:D:D It's so....cute and friendly ^_^ |
| On June 17th 2007 Jush Said : | |
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this one is nice. very enjoyable to read. |
| On June 16th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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We have all experienced that feeling....love the poem. |
| On June 16th 2007 shallowspit1 Said : | |
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I like it its descriptive and immaginitive. |
