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In the Deep
Sensitive
Complex
Destructive
I open myself up to you
A heat breathes
A sweet scent
A salty taste
A soft moisture
Layer upon layers
Like an onion, but sweetly fried to a caramel creaminess
And like a locked door,
There upon the opening
You will need a key
Find it... and with your fingers
Prove to the keeper of the key
That you are worthy enough to enter inside
Use those hands to produce the utmost trusting careness of loyalty
Be soft
Be gentle
Be patient
Once you have persuaded the keeper
You are given the key to the door
Pry it open slowly
At first, it may seem dark and mysterious
But isn't that what interests you?
It's like a rainforest
Unexpected and exotic
Damp, but fresh
The path is there though
It reaches deep withiin
Farther than it seems
The walls echo and vibrate with your steady steps
Slow steps or fast steps
Don't be careless, be careful... very careful
Express your wills as you pass deeper in
Don't be afraid, go on in now
I open myself wider for you to come inside
Come ...
Come in....
Come into me.......
| On February 26th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said: |
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| Ohh i like this :) Its doesnt scream what its about but its very obvious to the adult mind. Very wll written :) |
| On September 8th 2007 shallowspit1 Said: |
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| Dirty poem...dirty :) |
| On August 13th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
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| amazing poem! |
| On August 13th 2007 amptone Said: |
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| great! |
| On July 2nd 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
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| It is definetly intense~ |
| On June 19th 2007 Qurmudjin Said: |
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| vulvastic! |
| On June 18th 2007 pinocciodreams Said: |
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| dats relly good!
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| On June 17th 2007 Jush Said: |
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| :O this is a really great poem i like the formating style that you used. its really good. keep it up. |
| On June 16th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| OMG.....Wow....I am speachless. I love the way you write. |
| On June 16th 2007 adenragsdale Said: |
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| Interesting.
--Aden. |


