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In the Deep

Views (314) Passion Created on 6-14-07 Flag

Sensitive
   Complex
      Destructive
I open myself up to you
    A heat breathes
    A sweet scent
    A salty taste
    A soft moisture
Layer upon layers
  Like an onion, but sweetly fried to a caramel creaminess
And like a locked door,
     There upon the opening
        You will need a key
Find it... and with your fingers
   Prove to the keeper of the key
       That you are worthy enough to enter inside
Use those hands to produce the utmost trusting careness of loyalty
   Be soft
     Be gentle
        Be patient
  Once you have persuaded the keeper
    You are given the key to the door
       Pry it open slowly
At first, it may seem dark and mysterious
   But isn't that what interests you?
     It's like a rainforest
Unexpected and exotic
Damp, but fresh
    The path is there though
        It reaches deep withiin
           Farther than it seems
   The walls echo and vibrate with your steady steps
       Slow steps or fast steps
  Don't be careless, be careful... very careful
Express your wills as you pass deeper in
  Don't be afraid, go on in now
I open myself wider for you to come inside
          Come ...
               Come in....
                   Come into me.......

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On February 26th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said :
run4w4ytr4in Ohh i like this :) Its doesnt scream what its about but its very obvious to the adult mind. Very wll written :)
On September 8th 2007 shallowspit1 Said :
shallowspit1 Dirty poem...dirty :)
On August 13th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said :
boomboxbingbam amazing poem!
On August 13th 2007 amptone Said :
amptone great!
On July 2nd 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane It is definetly intense~
On June 19th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z ....I love this. I LOVE IT. My favorite poem to date :D <333333
On June 19th 2007 Qurmudjin Said :
Qurmudjin vulvastic!
On June 18th 2007 pinocciodreams Said :
pinocciodreams dats relly good!
On June 17th 2007 Jush Said :
Jush :O this is a really great poem i like the formating style that you used. its really good. keep it up.
On June 16th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg OMG.....Wow....I am speachless. I love the way you write.
On June 16th 2007 adenragsdale Said :
adenragsdale Interesting.

--Aden.