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yes it does, yes it's true... MmmhhmmmRate this Poem
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My Poems
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Tree Hugger |
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Can't Breathe... |
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Sunflower (Like a) |
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Untitled (18-6-03 + 22-2-07) |
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Hello Kitty |
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Fresh Rain |
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Love is Forever and Never |
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Snow Angels |
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Lusting After Blood |
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Clowns |
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kill me with ur depression |
XES=sex
Moan
Groan
Ecstasy
Hard
Large
Turgidity
Intoxicate
Masterbate
Bloom
Presume
Vivacious
Grope
Scope
Tenacious
Intercourse
Spastic Force (?)
*~feel free to add-on from here~* ^__~
Please Login to post comments| On February 10th 2008 kmk5487 Said: |
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| On January 4th 2008 sloppyramen Said: |
| I don't like it to be honest. maybe this sort of thing just isn't my cup o' tea, but I've seen much better from you Pang. Sorry- im just a natural critic... |
| On November 11th 2007 iluvbabies84 Said: |
| KEWL! |
| On August 27th 2007 Qurmudjin Said: |
| Creative Hunger Poetic Pang!
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| On August 15th 2007 starriewitch Said: |
| Very good. Need I say more? |
| On August 15th 2007 thetrueda Said: |
| nice lol very nice |
| On August 13th 2007 amptone Said: |
| p.s. Masterbate = ha ha ha |
| On August 13th 2007 amptone Said: |
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| Erotic, sensual and great! |
| On August 7th 2007 venus111 Said: |
| I love a good erotic poem, and this is a good erotic poem. Sweaty and sensual. Animal moans and profane anthems sworn to each other. Don't get me started. I'm a lonely old lady. haha Great job! |
| On August 6th 2007 ALLIEBIRD Said: |
| oh baby, thats hot. haha |
| On August 3rd 2007 JohnLG Said: |
| wow.lotsa rhymes! lol |
| On August 2nd 2007 jimbobthethird Said: |
| haha. spastic force? i love it |
| On August 2nd 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| I'm liking this one, too. I will have to think a bit for another couple of lines-I'll get back to ya:).... |
| On August 2nd 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| Oh wow, I love it....omg....I better not say anymore...lol. |
| On August 2nd 2007 California1516 Said: |
| haha..WOW..this is awesome..dont ask me why..it just is..lmao.. |
| On August 1st 2007 crazkoala Said: |
| hahaha i love the way its layed out =) |
| On August 1st 2007 crazkoala Said: |
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| hmmm... haha, good poem, awkward though--not something i would normally read, but it is great in its own way. =D im not sure what to say hahahaha *looks uncomfortable* |
| On August 1st 2007 Jush Said: |
| interesting.......haha! |
| On August 1st 2007 poet77 Said: |
| I love it, I'm not sure why it just flows...very nice |
| On August 1st 2007 joabizz Said: |
| Intense,,,,, It makes to want to ???? lol |
| On August 1st 2007 TaUroNui Said: |
| cool |
