PlayMoreWii

This is a poem on one of my pet peeves.

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When I Take False Blame

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Created on 8-22-07

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When I take false blame

My mind becomes a whirlwind

Devoid of focus and direction

It never ceases to end.

When I take false blame

My mind becomes a stormy sea

Now a destructive force of nature

Gone are my calm waters of sanity.

When I take false blame

My mind becomes a raging fire

Acting without taking thought

Destruction's my only desire.

When I take false blame

My mind becomes an earhquake

My reality splits in two

Leaving only chaos in its wake.

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On June 1st 2008 98854 Said :

	i know exactly how you feel trust me it never seems to cross your mind until its too late Love Chloooe

On December 18th 2007 Smarties4 Said :

	Awesome! Simple but very emotional and effective :)

On December 17th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :

	and im the scapegoat of my family so i can understand

On December 17th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :

	thats amazinggg w

On December 7th 2007 SilverTorch Said :

	lol, thats like me. i get pissed at anything anybody does when im in my angry mood...which is usually when im at shcool

On December 1st 2007 kimmy626 Said :

	not bad not bad. kinda creepy in that uber good way.

On September 10th 2007 PlayMoreWii Said :

	Thanks everyone! I'll see if I can come up with more!

On September 7th 2007 kimmaigirlai Said :

	omg!! ur great writer! u should put more up here!

On August 28th 2007 AmberRougeSim Said :

	wow ummm yea its easy to relate too and ....ummm speeachlessness

On August 24th 2007 akrovaz Said :

	You said this was one of your first poems? That's really good! I like it, so easy to relate to!

On August 23rd 2007 Burnley14 Said :

	I think it's really good. I like it.

On August 23rd 2007 emoxMCRx4ever Said :

	Great work. Sometimes I feel like that too.

On August 23rd 2007 maryannsnyder Said :

	wow its ....im speechless