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The Beast

Views (116) Fear Created on 6-18-08 Flag

The Beast

  

The night was dark and silent

But then she heard an eerie sound

She stood still and squinted her eyes

Then started to look around

 

It was too dark to see anything

The landscape just a blur

But she wasn’t alone in the graveyard

The beast was watching her

 

She should have walked the long way round

Underneath the bright street lights

But she’d gone this way many a time

She thought she’d be alright

 

She knew she wasn’t alone now

And could sense a presence was near

She tried to take a step forward

But her body was frozen with fear

 

Something caught her eye just ahead

She could see the beast’s silhouette

Foolishly she chose not to run

“Maybe he hasn’t seen me yet.”

 

But he had and was starting to move closer

She knew now she was in danger

Fearing for her life she turned her back

And ran from this menacing stranger

 

He soon caught up and cornered her

Her back was against the fence

The beast moved slowly toward her

His stare was so intense

 

She closed her eyes and started to pray

Thoughts running through her head

But nobody could help her now

She knew she was already dead

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On July 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Wonderful poem! I loved it! ~Kudos~
On June 24th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia it's so good and very well written...
On June 18th 2008 IAmButAMystery Said :
IAmButAMystery Very well written indeed.
On June 18th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 wow very good it had me on the edge
On June 18th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 very interesting....i like it too
On June 18th 2008 horrorqueenusa Said :
horrorqueenusa good.
On June 18th 2008 Stolensoul16 Said :
Stolensoul16 Ooooo...Creepy. Very good. *Shiver* it sends chills down my spine!!
On June 18th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very good, she shoulda known better than bein in the cemetary after dark, Nicely Done!!
On June 18th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I really love this one Paul. It's refreshing to read and tells a good story. Keep it up~ I like the imagery lots :)
On June 18th 2008 SweetCheese7 Said :
SweetCheese7 But good non the less.
On June 18th 2008 SweetCheese7 Said :
SweetCheese7 Very interesting for a poem to say the least.