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The Beast
The Beast
The night was dark and silent
But then she heard an eerie sound
She stood still and squinted her eyes
Then started to look around
It was too dark to see anything
The landscape just a blur
But she wasn’t alone in the graveyard
The beast was watching her
She should have walked the long way round
Underneath the bright street lights
But she’d gone this way many a time
She thought she’d be alright
She knew she wasn’t alone now
And could sense a presence was near
She tried to take a step forward
But her body was frozen with fear
Something caught her eye just ahead
She could see the beast’s silhouette
Foolishly she chose not to run
“Maybe he hasn’t seen me yet.”
But he had and was starting to move closer
She knew now she was in danger
Fearing for her life she turned her back
And ran from this menacing stranger
He soon caught up and cornered her
Her back was against the fence
The beast moved slowly toward her
His stare was so intense
She closed her eyes and started to pray
Thoughts running through her head
But nobody could help her now
She knew she was already dead
| On July 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Wonderful poem! I loved it! ~Kudos~ |
| On June 24th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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it's so good and very well written... |
| On June 18th 2008 IAmButAMystery Said : | |
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Very well written indeed. |
| On June 18th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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wow very good it had me on the edge |
| On June 18th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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very interesting....i like it too |
| On June 18th 2008 horrorqueenusa Said : | |
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good. |
| On June 18th 2008 Stolensoul16 Said : | |
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Ooooo...Creepy. Very good. *Shiver* it sends chills down my spine!! |
| On June 18th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very good, she shoulda known better than bein in the cemetary after dark, Nicely Done!! |
| On June 18th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I really love this one Paul. It's refreshing to read and tells a good story. Keep it up~ I like the imagery lots :) |
| On June 18th 2008 SweetCheese7 Said : | |
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But good non the less. |
| On June 18th 2008 SweetCheese7 Said : | |
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Very interesting for a poem to say the least. |


