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Have You
Have You
Have you ever felt like you’re all alone?
I do
Despite having so many people around me
I should have everything I ever need
Yet this feeling just won’t leave me
Have you ever felt hated?
I have
But I know it’s from my own actions
I don’t blame them for the way they feel
I understand their reactions
Have you ever despised yourself so much?
I do
But that’s from a past I cannot alter
I can throw all the apologies I have at them
But I know they will never falter
Have you ever wished you never existed?
I have
This world would be a better place without me
I’ve tried to make all the wrong things right
But all I’ve done is make people unhappy
Have you ever needed me like I need you?
Have you……..?
| On July 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This really made me sad reading this. I mean it good work. That feeling dosen't last forever. I agree with sixites cheer up! |
| On June 19th 2008 speederspider Said : | |
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It's hard to feel alone when you are surrounded by people. You long for that one true connection. Sometimes we are lucky enough to find it and sometimes we aren't. Sometimes we are lucky to find it for a short time...then it's gone. |
| On June 11th 2008 offutt123 Said : | |
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deep stuff |
| On May 30th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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wow,i have felt the same way and i like reading this poem. |
| On May 30th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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You portrayed such sadness and lonliness and guilt in this. I think at one point everyone can relate to your words. It made me sad to think of these thoughts and feelings filling up your mind, though you expressed them well. You shouldn't get so down on yourself-you are only human ya know!!! So as sixtiesdoll said---CHEER UP!!!! |
| On May 29th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I have~ I have. This is good. Poetry stems from beautiful sadness. Love it. Cheer up though :) |


