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Along the same lines as my other poems..

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Wrong Direction

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Wrong Direction 

I can feel the warmth coursing through my veins

The electricity when you brush your skin against mine

When you walk away this feeling remains

A feeling that goes way beyond the sublime

 

When you entered my life, you entered my soul

You’ll be a part of me whatever destiny decides

I know that our fate is out of my control

But for now I’m content, enjoying the ride

 

I never imagined this love could exist

I was sure that fairytales told children lies

But I knew they were true from the first time we kissed

When you told me you loved me, it was there in your eyes

 

I was happy, at first, to find a love so divine

Not realising the seeds of jealousy had been planted

I EXPECTED your love... thought you’d always be mine

And that’s when I started to take you for granted

 

I pushed the wrong buttons, hoping for a reaction

We slowly grew apart and I blamed you

I was never accountable for my own actions

Never stopping to think what you were going through

 

I hurt you when I knew you didn’t deserve it

Throwing away something that could have been special

I found true love, but I didn’t preserve it

Instead choosing a path paved in denial

 

Once part of my life, always part of my soul

I gave destiny a helping hand

I now realise fate was in my control

Your love washed away like a wave on the sand

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On March 17th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Beautiful...[:
On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is amazing. Beautiful rhyming and choice of words. I liked it~
On February 27th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 wow *thumbs up* I really like this one! Keep up the great work :)
On February 25th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very good, I really like this one
On February 22nd 2008 DarkAngel1691 Said :
DarkAngel1691 FREAKING AWESOME.... this is really good, alot of people can relate to this :)
On February 22nd 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC OMG OMG OMG!!! dude U ROCK!!! this is AMAZING!
On February 20th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :
AngelOfNight47 wow that describes something I just did myself. wow.
On February 20th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin simply great man this is awesome i loved the emotion!
On February 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This is my absolute favorite of yours! Truly a wonderful write!
On February 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Yep, ABAB. lol. I now know what that means

I know that the lines on destiny and fate are contradictive but I'm glad it still makes sense to you. :)

On February 20th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Ah, ABAB :) A nice little write. I love the "I now realize fate was in my control" I know your heart is worn-this is full of such sadness~
On February 20th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said :
run4w4ytr4in Ohh may be along the same lines but its definatley different! I LOVE this one! Tells a story i can more or less relate too aswell! :p xx