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Fight With Pain

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Created on 3-17-08

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Laying in bed, all by myself

Around the age of five, I had nobody else

No one there to protect me, through the yelling and the fights

No one there to say its okay and help me make it throughout the night

Constantly living in fear when my dad said I'm going to get a bottle

Never wanting to stick around to see all of tomorrow

I cried my heart out, but of course nobody came

Everyone was off fighting their own fight, but mine would just never tame

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On April 25th 2008 bbdolle Said :

	i love this one alot i mean like i can't relate but i still love it alot my family hardly ever fights and there are alot of us and i mean alot!!!!! talk about 14 yeah that's right and no i'm not mormin ar however you spell it i'm not religiouse!!!!!!

On March 28th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :

	I love this, very emotinal

On March 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	This is one of my favorites of yours for sure! It's really good. Sad too :(

On March 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said :

	This is really good! Packed full of emotion!

On March 18th 2008 mydragonlord Said :

	this one had me in tears!! you painted a picture of a little girl huddled in the coner of her room in tears, listening to the voices, hearing the fighting and in total fear. Brilliantly written!!!

On March 18th 2008 Thuggishone Said :

	lovely...Very self explanatory...love it... my favorite as well...william

On March 17th 2008 donkight Said :

	i went through the same pain so i stop caring about the past and listened to the future