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Never Never Land
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Created on 3-17-08
Sadness never heard of,
Love not a game,
Jealousy only a metaphor,
for the non existent pain.
Worry never imagined,
People never shamed.
No such thing as labels,
No such thing as tears,
Lies are never spoken of,
therefore no fears.
Happiness there forever,
Pain never felt,
Death a part of life,
and no one with regrets
Only in...
Never Never Land.
Please Login to post comments| On April 19th 2008 RealFiction616 Said : | |
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I like this one, very well written! Sorry I haven't been up to speed on your stuff, it's been pretty hectic in my life lately. |
| On March 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I really love this one lots. I love the wording, and the flow of it all. |
| On March 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Fantastic! |
| On March 18th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Where is the door? i want to knock and enter!! Loved it!! |
| On March 18th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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bea-u-tiful! |
| On March 18th 2008 metahippie117 Said : | |
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love it! |
