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My brother = My best friend.

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Our Little Heads

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Trudging through mud,

Small bare feet,

Sunlight streaming down on our little heads.

 

One set of feet mine,

The other, my Brother's

 

Finally coming to the Creeks edge,

Our toes testing the water.

He steps in first,

 

Like always,

I follow.

 

We splash around for days,

Getting sunburn all the while.

But we don't care.

We had fun, but now it's time to go.

 

 

Best days of my life spent with my Brother.

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On May 29th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE Aww thats sweet...i've never hung out with my brother like this..i never even rlly talk to my brother he's always gone & dont pay much attention to his family... The only time i remember even somewhat hanging out with his is when we were really little & i'd play with his little Star-Wars action guy things, only sometimes he'd let me play them with him though... lol..those were good times.. I miss it way back then.
On April 19th 2008 RealFiction616 Said :
RealFiction616 I love this one, it's full of happiness and good times, I love the title too!
On March 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ This is really good :)
On March 18th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord that sounds like so much fun!! and very sweet!!
On March 18th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone awww very cute...