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Reach The Sky

Views (186) Passion Created on 3-12-08 Flag

Come across the bridge

Come let’s fly away

Our bodies together, pulsing in ecstasy.

 

Heaven in its natural state, will be brought to us in whitest powder form

 

The constant conversation and never ending thrills

Will soon be replaced with teeth chattering chills

 

Happiness turns to pain in the blink of an eye,

The want grows stronger and stronger, safe to say an addiction has been made.

 

We lost all we ever wanted and all we ever needed

Just trying to reach the sky.

 

So now, come on and cross the bridge.

Let’s see how high we can go.

Next time we might now come back, but honestly,

Who knows?

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On June 25th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Well done.
On March 16th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 love it
On March 16th 2008 october1015 Said :
october1015 I love this! I love the reference to sexuality, and drugs, I think haha, I love the use of italics, but it seems to be missing some sort of...strength, uhm..passion...some base...it seems just a little weak, but of course, it's science class! Haha! Good job, nonetheless.
On March 15th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 this is my favorite so far
On March 14th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215
great job!
I REALLY enjoyed this!
On March 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone nicely written
On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 wow nicely written
On March 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem "The want grows stronger and stronger, safe to say an addiction has been made." Wow That send chills threw me! Very good work!
On March 13th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Just so everyone knows...I wrote this poem in science class...Haha not much effort put into it.
On March 13th 2008 yru00 Said :
yru00 good work, ^_^i loved it
On March 13th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like this one a lot. I was going to say something 'bout like sixiesdoll said above. You have a great balance in the high and low of the whole thing-addiction vs heaven or whatever. You write so sweetly of something so scary-great job!
On March 12th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 I really enjoyed this. Liked it lots. Good job Mackenzie
On March 12th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I like this poem, because it isn't safe~ It's a good notion on the high and low of it all~ Nicely written.
On March 12th 2008 Xaynos Said :
Xaynos This made me chuckle...in a way that I was excited and was anticipating something. I like it...this might sound weird, but I like your use of italics.
On March 12th 2008 valano Said :
valano I lik ethe way you drew addiction to meth, coke? Nice verbage. I think you could expand on this some to make the thought more complete. It is very creative but seems to be lacking some level of consequence? Loved it! ~*