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Views (254) Tragedy Created on 3-11-08 Flag
Darkness is creeping in from above, long shadows reach out and snatch away the doves.

Days slowly morph into one never ending night. Now nobody knows what's wrong from right.

Everything grows cold, desolate, and bitter. We should have asked the devil to maybe reconsider.

Too late now, Earth will not be able to regain. We have chosen our world, with Hell as the newly permanent domain.

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On June 25th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Well written. I liked your style in this one.
On March 15th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 i love the dark truth.
On March 14th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 This is great!
nicely done!
VERY well written!
On March 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone nicely done
On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Your poems are so well written! I love em :)
On March 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This has wonderful ryming! Dark and deep I really like this!
On March 13th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Okay, I love this one as well. You have wonderful word choice and I love the whole idea of it-well, not love what you are talking about (that is frightening and I hope we never have to see that) but I do love the way you wrote about it!! Wonderful flow and descriptions!
On March 12th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is amazingly written. Beautiful way in wording also~ Love this!!
On March 12th 2008 valano Said :
valano Good discriptive creativity. A fresh look on the darkside of life. To be bound to our decisions, living with consequenses of dark actions. ~*
On March 12th 2008 lushess007 Said :
lushess007 Awesome poem!! It is well spoken!! Great job!
On March 11th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 I love it! And yes lets home that day never comes.
On March 11th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX I loved this
On March 11th 2008 october1015 Said :
october1015 Very good! I like it! :)
On March 11th 2008 NisaNicole Said :
NisaNicole Nice!
On March 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very good, love the darkness
On March 11th 2008 Xaynos Said :
Xaynos I'm not sure if this is my natural negative-ness coming out...but I feel as if the world has it's foot half way through that door. Good job on the poem, I like the style. My favorite line is "We should have asked the devil to reconsider." Makes me smile...because reguardless of the deals you make, you won't attone for that kind of mistake...crap I ryhmed. Oh, well, great poem, keep posting them.
On March 11th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Let us hope that day never comes, well written!