Email:
Password:

Created By

Author's Comments

Sometimes what we need is all around us.

Rate this Poem

+6
My Poems
+7
+ 6
The Search For My Life
+ 4
Said the underdog
+ 3
Heart Of Black
+ 4
You were the Inspiration of My Life
+ 2
In Search Of Love
+ 2
Forever Young
+ 6
For My Father

The Search For My Life

Views (67) Other Created on 4-2-08 Flag

The Search For My Life

I can see the sky; the clouds are sleeping on the deep blue sea. I
Stand still, I look around, what do I see? I am
Alone, It's getting dark now, there is no illumination
By my beaten path to guide me. Perpetual darkness, no sounds, just me,
Myself and my thoughts, I'm lost, I'm lost, but I must persevere.

Searching, yearning for something, longing
For compassion, ardor, pathos. I have nothing but
The hope and these universal beliefs which make up my life. No
Light to help me in my search for the way
Of sentience, the way that can be followed with ease and the way of
Life that can make sense to me, it is all I want, it is all I need, to be free.

Frozen in time, it seems as if I have been searching forever.
Is this the end? Have I finally finished?
The sky, which was full of colour, is now but an empty
Space. There is nothing but the never ending home
Where atoms crash together in a magnitude far greater than
My feeble imagination could create. The
Heart of the universe, I look above me where
Once, no twice, do I stare in awe at its splendour. This
Was what I had been looking for. A look into the origin, the genuine fabric of my world.

Please Login to post comments
On April 3rd 2008 kaikaoru Said :
kaikaoru hard hitting and dramatic good job mayte!
On April 2nd 2008 bartaalltheway Said :
bartaalltheway i like this a lot. you're a really good writer. awesome job =]
On April 2nd 2008 Pete74567 Said :
my picture
Unfortunatley the line cuts out just a bit too soon however look at the poem, there is much more than first meets the eye if you look at it. Read it again, read into it. I've tried to get in a few techniques here and there is a message inside. As I said, mind the line breaks and look at it if they were normal, copy and paste it into a notepad if you must but by all means take a good long look at it. Thanks.