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Unnoticed
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Created on 3-23-07
Unnoticed
Unnoticed I went to you,
unspoken you were to me,
until the shinny sparkle
of your eye set me free,
with a squealished voice,
my heart racing fast,
and the warmth of my
blood shooting through
my body, then and only
then I got up the nerve to
say hi as you passed on by.
Please Login to post comments| On April 6th 2008 ForgotHow2Love Said : | |
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All the poetry I write and read is usally dark and depressing. This is a good change of pace. Keep up the awesome work =) |
| On May 16th 2007 x3debbix3 Said : | |
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this is cutee* |
| On April 30th 2007 insanepixie86 Said : | |
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aww. Cute... |
| On April 30th 2007 nascott01 Said : | |
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Short and sweet :) |
| On April 29th 2007 sis1012005 Said : | |
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i like this one is really good! |
| On April 29th 2007 yummyyumcandy Said : | |
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same here shy but have crushes good job! |
