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Good Night, my love. |
Good Night, my love.
As I am saying good night at the end of the day,
And you are not here, but many miles away,
My heart is so empty and so lonely inside,
As I wipe away a tear I am trying to hide.
I close my eyes and try to go to sleep,
But with the sadness inside I begin to weep.
Suddenly I remember what you once said to me,
Just meet me in the stars, waiting for you I will be.
When distance tends to keep us apart,
Remember I still hold you near in my heart.
When the night together, can't be ours,
Just close your eyes and meet me in the stars.
Remembering those words, I begin to smile,
And gently close my eyes, lessening the miles.
I can see the stars, oh how beautifully arranged,
But you are not there, no hug to exchange.
I sit alone waiting, with hope in my heart,
No longer wanting to be kept apart.
Suddenly in the distance, a shadow appears,
A tear rolls down my face and the image is clear.
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| On March 3rd 2008 Univarsity Said: |
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| WOW! This is beautifully written. Especially for your age :D |
| On December 13th 2007 kg108551 Said: |
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| Very nice |
| On September 11th 2007 unknownwolfie Said: |
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| WOW!!! REALLY WONDERFUL! |
| On June 22nd 2007 101091 Said: |
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| Great job. I love it. You did such a good job with painting a picture with your words. |
| On April 29th 2007 fullbloodedfilipin Said: |
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| GALENG MO!!!! MAGANDA!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!! It's bery bery good. Keep it up, I shall be looking more of your work, whenever you make some that is. |
| On April 14th 2007 ifjgdifhgf Said: |
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| LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!Comment my stuff please? |


