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Fire and Flames.

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I look through the fire,

I look through the flames,

I look for desire,

Within the tames,

Within the origin,

That holds us close,

Within the wounds,

That will not close.

 

I look through the cold,

I look through the heat,

I look for compassion,

Within the blue flames,

Within the gray smoke,

That covers us all,

Within the sky,

That has seen all.

 

 

(( Need ideas for lines two and four of the second stanza please! Need them to rhyme. : / )) 

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On April 2nd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I can't think of any off hand. Maybe I can think of something later! :)
On February 23rd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 Idk what to put because stanzas really arnt my thing. But hopefull you'll find someone to help you. I have faith that you will!