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EXTREMELY sweet!!!

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A poem to my love.. Whoever you are...

A poem to my love.. Whoever you are...

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I'll stare into your eyes and listen as you talk

I'll cuddle as we sit and hold you as we walk
I'll wake you with good morning and always say good night
And if everything goes wrong, I'll try and make it right

I'll tell you that you're beautiful everytime we kiss
And when we finally say goodnight your lips I'll surley miss
I'll never try to hurt you, but if I ever do
I'll kiss your nose and rub your cheek and tell you I love you

I'll tell my friends I love you and never be ashamed
Cause what we have together should surely be proclaimed
You cause the world to fade away whenever you're in sight
I long for nothing more than to forever hold you tight

I can't help but smile when I think about our love
You truley are an angel sent to me from up above
I'll never make you do the things that you don't want to do
Forever I will wait, as long as I'm with you

 

[my boyfriend wrote this before he knew me and now he says he knows it for me the 22nd will be our 5month anniversary and im SOOO happy i love him with my whole heart and as God as my witness i will marry him!!]

 

 

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On June 24th 2008 tinkiwinki4u Said :
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HOW CAN HE WRITE SUCH BEAUTIFUL POETRY B4 HE MET DA ONE AND ONLY ( WHICH IS YOU)... DEN WHO DID HE WRITE IT FOR.. WHERE DID DA EMOTIONS COME FROM? SOUNDS LYKE HE KNOES WAT LOVE IS B4 HE MET YOU
On May 15th 2008 CaseyVIP Said :
CaseyVIP I LOVED this poem... I'm not a poet, but I feel this EXACT way about someone. If you don't mind, could I give it to her?
On May 9th 2008 chamaolie Said :
chamaolie this is really sweet... i call my month anniversaries = monthiversaries!!! hehehe.... this is a really nice poem!
On April 26th 2008 hottie3711 Said :
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Girl this is so sweet. If you have a guy that really feels that way about you and he feels that way 3 years later. You better keep a hold of him.
On April 19th 2008 allisonpaige92 Said :
allisonpaige92 this is soo sweet. =D i wish i had someone like that..
On March 10th 2008 looknforthat1 Said :
looknforthat1 this is so cute good job... very awesome
On March 3rd 2008 sarahness7507 Said :
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 very sweet poem..I loved it..
On January 29th 2008 poetrydreamer Said :
poetrydreamer That is the sweetest thing ever! omg! My bf and I just celebrated our 10 month on the 21st! We got some keepers lol
On January 24th 2008 Luverofmichael Said :
Luverofmichael Omgsh i love this poem ^^ me and my boyfriend one year anniversary is 2mrw ^^ and i'm soo excited and as god as MY witness i WILL marry my boyfriend too ^^
On January 24th 2008 Luverofmichael Said :
Luverofmichael Omgsh i love this poem ^^ me and my boyfriend one year anniversary is 2mrw ^^ and i'm soo excited and as god as MY witness i WILL marry my boyfriend too ^^
On January 3rd 2008 boomchild56 Said :
boomchild56 This is a wonderful poem, not a word out of place..i love it when that happens..ty for the read..cc
On December 27th 2007 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame I'm sorry that this happened, but you WILL find the perfect guy who will be everything you want and more!
On December 24th 2007 OMGitsANNA Said :
OMGitsANNA I think this is probably the most horrific thing I have read in a while. We arent together any more we dated for 15months and now its over. I think my heart skipped a beat when I found this.
On December 18th 2007 vernathome Said :
vernathome so sweet I aspire to such beauty
On November 28th 2007 hayleyswiger14 Said :
hayleyswiger14 wow this is excellant.....i had a love like that once....lol
On November 26th 2007 bnemerick13 Said :
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Grl....im happy that you found your man that you will be with... i loved it... you go grl... i wish you both all the best...
On November 23rd 2007 tuashleytu Said :
tuashleytu Awwwweee.... I like this a LOT. Reminds me of me and my Jeremy......
On November 10th 2007 Cloeygirl86 Said :
Cloeygirl86 i loved the poem.that's how i feel bout me and mii boyfriend.i love him soo much even tho we brpke up 3 different time but nothign can keep m from loving him!
On November 10th 2007 69benjamin Said :
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that was to great for words to describe
On October 25th 2007 BartleNaras Said :
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Omg! I love ur poem, and today's actually me and my boyfriends 5 month anniversary! Lol! I love him so much! I'm determined to make it through this high school drama, and marry him too! He feels the same also... he actually felt the same way 1st... Okay well anyways I just thought that wuz kinda funny... I love your poem!
On October 13th 2007 fondamay Said :
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oh that was real sweet,good luck!
On September 16th 2007 browneyed5286 Said :
browneyed5286 awww that was beautiful`
On September 15th 2007 becritchie Said :
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES
On September 1st 2007 Peanutjr8 Said :
Peanutjr8 i love this poem, really great poem, if i could i would steal it froem u (jk...lol). your very luck y to have a guy like that...good luck!!!!