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Common Suicide

Views (176) Tragedy Created on 12-21-07 Flag
Wrists bleeding,,
Eyes crying,,
Hands shaking,,
Soul dying ..

Eyes closing,,
Blood drying,,
Heart breaking,,
Body trying ..

Skin freezing,,
Razor dropping,,
Noises fading,,
Heart stopping .. X
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On December 25th 2007 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 its very powerful.and thats how it does go. good job
On December 25th 2007 claude54130 Said :
claude54130 Excellent job!
On December 23rd 2007 vernathome Said :
vernathome excellent, I love that it was brief,made my heart race
On December 23rd 2007 MrKeesee Said :
MrKeesee this is really powerful and scary, great righting
On December 22nd 2007 niamiles Said :
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its sad i've feel this way a lot...great i love it!!!
On December 22nd 2007 tazza89 Said :
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um gud it really does emo!!
On December 22nd 2007 glinka07 Said :
glinka07 emo!!
On December 22nd 2007 glinka07 Said :
glinka07 emo!!
On December 21st 2007 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller discreet to the point and very vivid... in its own power it holds a light :) very impressive :)
On December 21st 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay I very much agree with leanngregory...this was very powerful, yet short..captivating, breaktaking, inspiring. I loved it! Keep up the great work. You have quite the talent there...
On December 21st 2007 tkotapout Said :
tkotapout whoa...that was just so amazing and powerful.im amazed.
On December 21st 2007 lilangel1301 Said :
lilangel1301 You did really good with only few words!, check out mine suicde poem, REALLY GOOD JOB!
On December 21st 2007 leanngregory Said :
leanngregory i like the simplicity vs complexity in this how it says so much by saying so little :)
On December 21st 2007 fallenXx420 Said :
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that was very well done...
On December 21st 2007 xkronosx2011 Said :
xkronosx2011 wow. you forgot breathtaking. that was good. dam you can write.