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In my Mind |
Love Song
Baby when i was around you i would lose my mind cause you were just sitten there so sween and so kind.
As i gained up on the right time i asked you out and you became mine
well the first day was fun never thought of it much though i could never think of having such luck.
An though the time wasnt bad i almost asked for your number but i forgot imagine that bummer.
I tried to sleep that night but i was filled with exite so i sat there all happy never thinking of anything bad.
But this good day, showed that it would go away. Theres nothing good that could leave for me, or at least nothing i can see. People sitting and laughing but i cant lose hope. But i never learned to have faith so i mine as well be locked away.
Well i returned to school thinking i was cool cause i had a girl after so many days.
And though it was our second day she came up to me.
She said lets just break but i want to be friend.
This so much confused me well i wanted for her to be sent to hell.
Though i dont understand why she said yes in the first place.
Was this some sick game? Just to bring down nick
I felt so cold at that one moment though i still angered up.
I though i found love after looking so bad then it turned around and i became mad and still i think in my own mind that she isnt sweet and kind.
But this good day, showed that it would go away. Theres nothing good that could leave for me, or at least nothing i can see. People sitting and laughing but i cant lose hope. But i never learned to have faith so i mine as well be locked away.
So after that night i got in a fight.
Two best friends at it again.
Though one of the many "worst days of my life" felt like i got cheated on by a wife.
So now all i can think of is lust not love seeing that fallen angels come from above.
I need some kind of shield to keep me from bitches though it seems they come to me i have to admit it.
But this good day, showed that it would go away. Theres nothing good that could leave for me, or at least nothing i can see. People sitting and laughing but i cant lose hope. But i never learned to have faith so i mine as well be locked away.
| On October 9th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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this poem is really nice. I love it. I can relate to it some what from my last b/f |
| On August 17th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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Hey Nick, this is actually really pretty good! You wanna sing it for us w/ your guitar sometime? :) |
| On July 29th 2007 shiv18 Said : | |
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hey, really good poem :) x |
| On July 29th 2007 darknesscry Said : | |
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my favorite!
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| On July 29th 2007 october1015 Said : | |
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I love it. I would love to hear you sing it on your guitar. its so nice. I love it |
| On July 20th 2007 cuteness66 Said : | |
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its good.. but i kind of get confused did u lose ure faith in girls or in the relationship.. either way its got meaning.. i hope u will read my newest poem called who u think i am. thanx |
| On July 12th 2007 WHJHchick Said : | |
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I like! |
| On July 5th 2007 Kaglan Said : | |
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awww
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| On June 22nd 2007 ellies15 Said : | |
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aw so sad n goood. i love it. |
| On June 22nd 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said : | |
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perfect.. just perfect!!! |
| On March 21st 2007 thecolorblack Said : | |
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I would like to hear you sing it...with guitar and all. |
| On March 18th 2007 pinkpanther93 Said : | |
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nice |
| On March 18th 2007 LovesVictim913 Said : | |
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hi..i really like this poem. good job!! |


