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"Growing up with so much pain...."

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My own Hell

Views (682) Fear Created on 12-6-06 Flag

Welcome Welcome boys and girls i see you come to challenge your self as you enter my little world dont get so scared that you start to hurl

Welcome to my heart and soul were are things that feel so cold.

As the night progresses out i will fill yours with thoughts about things you have only seen in dreams.

You may be safe with out no chance but i have lived the devil's dance

So boys and girls sit down next to your peers AS I BRING OUT YOUR DEEPEST FEARS

When i was a young lad my life seemed sad with my mom always fighting with my dad.

Then one day it all fell apart and my dad left the mark

I lived with my mother for so long see, growing up in the ghetto were people beat me.

By the time i was ten i was the king of the hill the other kids, upper class men...it was me they all feared.

As i knew through out the only way to get them back was to simply act like i was on crack.

By going crazy in the city it came the day when it dawned to me.

I moved in my dad my mother natrually sad but i dont care im out of there.

Living in a small town growing stronger i slowly gained my followers.

Now i run the whole dam school i wouldnt simply call me a fool.

Day and night my life filled with fright then i listen to the album "The Wall"

So i took this to my earnings and fought of these people built a wall and forever kept my peace.

The people who cross through my wall may be so scared they my just die and fall.

I seen things a five year old shouldnt have seen but with out these i wouldnt be me.

Now if you know me so well you dont treat me bad or ill MAKE YOUR LIFE HELL.

I can be a good person i can be great get me mad and That would be your last mistake.

                                                       As the Curtains close in front of me you need to know people of the court and people of the state i nick campbell would like to tell one last thing to my pears. As my darkness grew to what it is finding peace can be harder than this.

So Being a little kid seeing fights, you cant forget, growing up with so much pain how can one not go insaine?

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Chandapanda08 omg i love it ..
On October 18th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 wow this is my favorite poem out of all of yours but the rest are still really good!!
On August 30th 2007 Peanutjr8 Said :
Peanutjr8 wow, good poem, sad though
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On July 8th 2007 Sissy0604 Said :
Sissy0604 : ( That terrible! : ( Good poem but sad.... again! Very sad!
On June 29th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx it sounds kinda like a rap song but i like it ecspecailly the ending.
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NicoleSmith159 I liked it
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On December 22nd 2006 NickCamp Said :
NickCamp lol my life story.
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313Goth i agree
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