Email:
Password:

Created By

Author's Comments

Love Poem

Rate this Poem

+6

Info

Link:
Created: 05/10 2008
Views: 162
Category: Love

My Poems

+ 55
The Wall
+ 52
When The World Ends
+ 36
The Side Without Light
+ 46
Since I Dont Have You
+ 110
Then Your On Your Own
+ 39
My own Hell
+ 27
Im Numb
+ 18
Dark Side Of The Soul
+ 27
Love Song
+ 8
Alone
+ 6
The World (Haley)
+ 12
In my Mind

The World (Haley)

To the world you may be one person

but to one person you may be the world.

Being that one person i know if the world ends i'll have you, my world.

You are the sun i revolve around.

You are the stars i stare at.

You are the black hole im being sucked into.

People change, rearrange, and become strange but i remain the same.

Peace sells and if it means i can have you im buying.

Wealthy are hated, pour underrated, which ever you are ill take it.

Imagine there's no heaven is impossible when you're my religion.

Children cry, elders pass but together our lives last.

When you smile my heart burns, when you dont im concerned.

My feelings always grew but now i think i love you.

Please Login to post comments
On August 7th 2009 ThruOnesEyes Said: 
ThruOnesEyes 'Don't let anybody criticise your writing'-- so by that logic, he'll never improve if everybody thinks he's the greatest writer of this decade when nobody has the face to tell him when he's horrible, & he's too connected to his passion to build a shock-proof shit detector. Deadpoet just stated that the ending wasn't as strong as the middle. She didn't say the poem was bad, shitty, horrible, & definately wasn't criticising it. The Beatles are an AMAZING band; but some of their songs aren't as strong or good as others-- does that somehow take away their status as The Beatles, or what they've done for music history? "If You Love It Then The World Should Love It"..how's that even work? Just, wow, Halmay. Wow.
On June 22nd 2008 HALMAY Said: 
HALMAY i totaly disagree with deadpoet. that whole poem was meaningful and it really made sense. it was something that you wouldn't normally find on testriffic and it was wonderful. don't let anybody critisize your writing. if you love it then the world should love it. keep writing what you want. -HALMAY
On May 10th 2008 XdrytearsX Said: 
XdrytearsX Romantic!
On May 10th 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet it was real good in the middle but the ending not so much (good yes but not as good as the middle)