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Then Your On Your Own
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Created on 11-26-06
You and me, me and you we somtimes act like fools....
I made a vow to keep you at hand then the army took me away.....
Im still with you in your heart...ill be back in time alone
I will take you as far as i can go, after that then your on your own dont you cry, dont you scream, ill be back trust me.....
As the war carrys on, they ship me out alone
they took me to their jail, were it was like a living hell
I will take you as far as i can go, after that then your on your own dont you cry, dont you scream ill be back hopefully.
They took me in, they shot me dead.....please dont cry just rest your head.....
I have taken you as far as i could go now you know your on your own
Please Login to post comments| On June 4th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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woh!!!! i was just browsing and came across your poem!! it is like soo touching...i felt so bad for the person who was on their own!!! you are awesome!! |
| On May 23rd 2008 MileyCyrus10 Said : | |
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it's oky not really what i was looking 4 though |
| On March 23rd 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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I love, love this song sooooooooo much!! |
| On October 18th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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awww this was soo sad but it was very good!! |
| On September 30th 2007 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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awe this is realle goodd =] |
| On September 15th 2007 HOTSTUFFF101 Said : | |
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awwwwwww =*( |
| On August 18th 2007 loulou151992 Said : | |
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naw this brought tears to my eyes...really gwd |
| On July 31st 2007 Hollehmariee Said : | |
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nice |
| On July 10th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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Nice. =] |
| On July 9th 2007 mayzie71 Said : | |
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I really like the way your poems are written, most poems on here sing songy dr suess type shit and they have feeling but they just don't flow very well. Yours definatly show your musician backround, very well written. |
| On July 9th 2007 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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Hey i like this its pretty cool i kno how that is i kno alot off ppl that are or were in the army its pretty cool how u represented that |
| On July 9th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Nice. |
| On July 9th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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awwwwwwww
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| On July 8th 2007 Sissy0604 Said : | |
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Aww thats soooo sad : '( Good but SAD!! |
| On July 5th 2007 imabeauty Said : | |
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omg. this was the first one I read. I love it and I'm trying so hard not to cry because I can relate to this. |
| On June 22nd 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said : | |
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This is like my favorite thing that you have writen so far. I LOVED IT SO MUCH! :] |
| On April 8th 2007 idolsforever Said : | |
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nice... emotion and powerful :] |
| On March 10th 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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OH, THE SOFT SIDE |
| On February 8th 2007 Kath28 Said : | |
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oh my...this is sooo sweeet |
| On February 3rd 2007 brianawest Said : | |
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wow.. this is really good! i love it! |
| On January 14th 2007 EmKat175 Said : | |
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This is really good it really has a good meaning!!! |
| On January 6th 2007 gangstakayla Said : | |
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wow. amazing. |
| On January 2nd 2007 LaveMoofin333 Said : | |
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I love it, i would love to hear your band play things like this |
| On January 2nd 2007 NickCamp Said : | |
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once again these are my bands lyrics@@
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| On January 2nd 2007 cocopuff2005 Said : | |
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i like it! |
