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Inspired by Pink Floyd The Wall

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The Wall

Views (521) Tragedy Created on 11-24-06 Flag

With the wall as tall as the soaring sky, people stand behind tyring to break out side.

when you trap yourself from the land the wall will take you hand on hand

When your mother runs your life it makes you run and hide.

When you look into the sky you that that bird so high.

When your corrupt by power and shame the trail will come your way.

When the master takes the chance you will be free to dance

Learn how to live without the wall as the bricks begin to fall......

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On December 29th 2007 DemonzR4eva Said :
DemonzR4eva I enjoyed it!!! PEACE!!!!!
On October 18th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 this is really good
On September 30th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole love it =]=]
On August 4th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz Didn't know you wrote poetry. It's very creative though. Awesome Work
On August 4th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz Didn't know you wrote poetry. It's very creative though. Awesome Work
On July 9th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 well done..
On July 9th 2007 mayzie71 Said :
mayzie71 Excellent this is how true poetry is supposed to be written, it is universal and can relate to diffrent people.
On July 8th 2007 Sissy0604 Said :
Sissy0604 This is pretty kool! I like it! : )
On June 22nd 2007 lvm3932 Said :
lvm3932 wow i like it did you get that from pink floyed ?
On June 22nd 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said :
NicoleSmith159 I like it a lot. :]
On June 21st 2007 sabbathNikole Said :
sabbathNikole This is different from anything i've ever read. It connects different aspects of everyones lives, things that you wouldn't really think of as binding, of trapping one in. I liked it.
On March 10th 2007 diet7up Said :
diet7up SOUNDS LIKE A SONG, NICE
On February 1st 2007 ralicia Said :
ralicia Were you inspired by Pink Floyd? Its a nice poem that looks farther than yourself
On January 3rd 2007 quaizzi Said :
my picture
Nicely written
On January 2nd 2007 LaveMoofin333 Said :
LaveMoofin333 I like this one. youre very good
On December 30th 2006 Slyclever Said :
Slyclever it's good...because it's always good to break down the wall
On December 24th 2006 clay6618 Said :
clay6618 I like it too.
On December 22nd 2006 CupidChokehold Said :
CupidChokehold its good
On December 22nd 2006 leeshaforeverr Said :
leeshaforeverr i like it =) reallly good
On December 22nd 2006 Cheshir Said :
Cheshir I like it
On December 22nd 2006 Greebo Said :
Greebo This is a good poem... well done.
On November 28th 2006 maryjoseph Said :
maryjoseph hmmm good makes me think well written
On November 26th 2006 iloveanimals Said :
iloveanimals i like this poem
On November 26th 2006 froglover18 Said :
froglover18 i like this one..:)
On November 25th 2006 saxaphonegirl Said :
saxaphonegirl all of ur poems r good