N5607

I never thought I could fall...

+10

My Poems

+11

I never thought...

Views (73)

Created on 5-25-08

Flag

When I first saw you

I never thought I'd end up where I am

I never thought it was possible

I never thought it could happen

But when you touched my hand

Something must have happened

I looked in to your eyes

And it all began

Slowly but surely

I'm falling in love with you

There's no way I can stop it

No way I can change it

This may be it

I should give it a chance

This is our time

This is my life.

Please Login to post comments

On June 8th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :

	Deep; good job :) Remember though; don't just live for you - live for God too :)

On June 2nd 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said :

	This is good; I think that perhaps the vocabulary/imagery is a bit weak, perhaps tweak it a tad, but other than that, this is a beautiful piece that I am sure everyone can relate to..great job. -Lozer™

On May 31st 2008 Bexi93 Said :

	sweet and so romantic keep up the gd work ;)

On May 27th 2008 Pikkakard Said :

	Lovely poem. I totally understand those feelings

On May 27th 2008 Laralei Said :

	Its so sweet and romantic. Good job :-)