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Created on 6-10-07
Darkness falling.
Demons calling.
"Enjoy the pain.
Enjoy the rain."
I want it to stop.
Like a bubble I'll pop.
I want to be free.
I want to be me.
Take me away.
Please, I pray.
I cannot stay.
I will continue to be
So unhappy.
I don't understand
The pain from this man.
Is this love?
Love from above?
Please Login to post comments| On July 5th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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hmmmmm,, kinda confusing,,, the ending,, specially more confusing,,, i like the beginning tho, had a great flow goin there,,,, very good lines of expression,, somewhat deep,,, good job,,, ~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On June 11th 2007 YamagataYugi Said : | |
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bravo another well written poem.. |
| On June 10th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said : | |
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*aplaudes* very good, most can relate |
