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Created on 1-10-08
& the feeling in my heart,
it simply amazes me
'cause just a moment ago
I couldn't live without you,
couldn't breathe without you.
But now I realize
I can't live;
can't even breathe with you.
your lies were drowning me,
killing me slowly,
secretly hurting me.
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Please Login to post comments| On January 30th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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very emotional |
| On January 23rd 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Really deep, well done! |
| On January 19th 2008 DMMgirl Said : | |
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I like it. And I do the same when I have writer's block. |
| On January 14th 2008 NisaNicole Said : | |
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Seems very deep. When I have writer's block what I do is make a list of phrases or words that come to mind, then I try to write. With some work they all fit together & usually turn out pretty good. |
