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A mans wife cheats and gets cought.vote?Rate this Poem
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The Question |
What love is this?
The innocent beauty your eyes once held, tainted now like poisoned wells, so many things too late to say, in my heart I still feel that way, the way I felt the night I first held you, now a pain so deep I can not tell you. Deceits so fresh torture the mind as flames to flesh as your gaze meets mine. Wishing to awake from this my bad dream I focus now on you approaching me. Your lips burden under cold lies, vain deceits show clearer in your scheming eyes. What love is this? Your tender kiss turned a hateful hiss. What love is this? Your eyes, warm and soothing, now cold and brooding. What love is this? Your breasts so soft so right, now a trap set to spring with every sleepless night. I wont take I love you as the answer anymore, why wont you let me by the back door? Is this his? Look at it on the floor! I know you see it, his shoes, shirt and more…
Please Login to post comments| On August 5th 2007 meanatheart Said: |
| :] Loving it. |
| On July 24th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said: |
| i love the feeling of it and the way it flows =DDD |
| On June 21st 2007 duece4932 Said: |
| what a busted down ho, your too cute for that. "your better off alone anyways" |
| On June 21st 2007 duece4932 Said: |
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| what a busted down ho, your too cute for that. "your better off alone anyways" |
| On June 8th 2007 grndayrks92 Said: |
| WOW!! |
| On May 20th 2007 Michelle1444 Said: |
| This one has to be my fav. I love it very much so,, |
| On May 18th 2007 pink23fairie Said: |
| AWESOME!! |
| On May 18th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| very good poem! :D |
| On May 17th 2007 Cloeygirl86 Said: |
| I love this poem..it's good |
| On May 17th 2007 amptone Said: |
| Great line, just great! |
| On May 17th 2007 amptone Said: |
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| Your lips burden under cold lies, vain deceits show clearer in your scheming eyes |
| On May 17th 2007 emochic4lyfe Said: |
| that's hot*lots of luv 2 u* TORIE |
| On May 17th 2007 fefe5644 Said: |
| nice like it |
| On May 16th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| Very nice~ |
| On May 15th 2007 Ekabaina Said: |
| I like this one a lot, very good, makes you think, nice rhyming |
| On May 15th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said: |
| THIS IS DAMN GOOD. I LUV IT. |
| On May 15th 2007 MikieScene1 Said: |
| THANKS=) |
| On May 15th 2007 S4MB4M Said: |
| i really like it. :] |
| On May 15th 2007 MikieScene1 Said: |
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| I LOVE YOU CORR |
| On May 15th 2007 courtneycrunk1 Said: |
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| here you go hun!
ily! |
| On May 15th 2007 MikieScene1 Said: |
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| thanks bby=) |
| On May 15th 2007 B3CC4BOOM Said: |
| amazing. |
| On May 15th 2007 sophiepinkfair Said: |
| this should be a rap. haha. actually though |
| On May 15th 2007 halltamera2 Said: |
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| that is hot |
| On May 15th 2007 MikieScene1 Said: |
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| haha, thanks=) |
