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it's very short, and i hope you like it

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Created: 05/10 2007
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Category: Pain

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The Question

Why?

 


 why must we cling to fleeting shreds of hope, a dancing memory of what was and may still yet be, a slow burning passion of you close to me. what was a white hot love, a faded scar, a mark of passion left above my heart. a kiss felt only in my dreams, a fruitless touch, what does it mean?
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On August 5th 2007 meanatheart Said: 
meanatheart My favorite also :]
On July 24th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said: 
XxEMOxBITCHxX My all time fav buddy i love it!
On June 8th 2007 grndayrks92 Said: 
grndayrks92 im bad at leaving comments sooo i'll just say this.......im speachless.
On May 25th 2007 jmh1011 Said: 
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i lobe it!!!!
On May 22nd 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang awwww... *heart-break*.... it's deep like a stab wound,, i like how u kept it all in one paragraph,,, LOL,,,, very great work,, ^___^ ~~~~~Pang
On May 20th 2007 dreamlesleep Said: 
dreamlesleep this is my favorite. its so real for me.
On May 20th 2007 Michelle1444 Said: 
Michelle1444 very goodd.I can answer that question in ur poem but i dont wanna get into tht i tlk alot & it would take me all night =]]
On May 19th 2007 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane I love this one! Definetly my favorite~
On May 18th 2007 pink23fairie Said: 
pink23fairie wow...that's good!
On May 18th 2007 California1516 Said: 
California1516 wow this is really good..me likey :D
On May 18th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: 
chrissey08h2 this is deep.. i love it... this might be my fav poem that u have written.. but i have one more to read.. lol.. i love how u write its so good..
On May 17th 2007 LykeeKayTay Said: 
LykeeKayTay this is deep. i love your style of writing.
On May 16th 2007 emochic4lyfe Said: 
emochic4lyfe that is actually really good i didnt know well believe guys could write poetry like that
On May 11th 2007 sophiepinkfair Said: 
sophiepinkfair that is actually the best i have seen you write. a favourite