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Your eyes, My deceit.

Views (521) Passion Created on 5-4-07 Flag
Your eyes.Of me a mockery steeped by shadow, just beneath the eye dances in nervous anticipation a guilty burdening of days past, truth told fire of all known yet never spoken yearns a voice just shy my own. My deceit.Demon hate, Devils passion woven bitter sweet motion, breath burns, cold is the kiss. Swallowed your tongues Seething unrest, slid back my throat to sour the stomach, pierced hearts bleeding mine souls deceit.
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On August 4th 2007 BreakXmeX Said :
BreakXmeX i love it very nice.you should readmy stories i call them poems but it is kinda story form lol
On July 28th 2007 sandyalonso Said :
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On July 24th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said :
XxEMOxBITCHxX wow thats deep i like it good job!
On June 8th 2007 grndayrks92 Said :
grndayrks92 Awsome poem! love it. ur very talented!
On May 21st 2007 thinblackice Said :
thinblackice That's really good. I wish I could write that good.
On May 20th 2007 Michelle1444 Said :
Michelle1444 I think u can write very good=] U prob. have lots more thoughts then tht tho=]]
On May 18th 2007 smilelove007 Said :
smilelove007 i like it. =]
On May 18th 2007 pink23fairie Said :
pink23fairie Wow! awesome!
On May 18th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said :
chrissey08h2 emotional.. i like!... very good imagedry..! THUMBS UP!
On May 17th 2007 slipknotbabe Said :
slipknotbabe my kind of poem:-] love it.
On May 17th 2007 LucianLust Said :
LucianLust oo graphic o.o
On May 5th 2007 Stormece Said :
Stormece Good poem. Pretty deep. I like it.