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Pregnancy, The boyfriend.Rate this Poem
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Your eyes, My deceit. |
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Why? |
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What love is this? |
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The Question |
The Question
Sitting by the phone with the question on my mind
What will the thin stick say, what will my love find?
The minutes tick by slowly, like the passing of the seasons
And with every answerless second my anxiousness overtakes reason.
It's ringing now, what awaits me masked by my loves voice?
I hate this impersonal means, in person would have been my choice.
'What does it say babe?" faintly whispers out, "sorry my throat is dry"
And suddenly my heart sinks as I hear her begin to cry.
Are these tears of joy or sobs wrenched by sorrow,
I hate to beg her questions but my nerve wont last until tomorrow.
I wait , I listen, as my mind starts wandering,
Mixed feelings the subject of all my detached ponderings.
We're not ready, Unplanned as this all may be,
I can only think of this life my love might carry from me.
Still not knowing the answer held in her hand,
"Babe, yes or no we can do this, I know we can"
Her tears soften, "because you are my love, and I am your man"
| On September 4th 2008 BreakXmeX Said : | |
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nice i like this one alot!Keep writeing
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| On November 12th 2007 conniea95 Said : | |
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WOW!! this is really touching you did a great job |
| On September 26th 2007 assumetheworst Said : | |
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wow this is great
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| On September 21st 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said : | |
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DARLIN, U BLOW ME AWAY EVERY DAMN TIME!LUV IT & THE WAY U PUT 2 WORDS THE FEELINGS OF THE MOMENT! |
| On September 11th 2007 weirdmisfit Said : | |
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Oh wow, I LOVED this! totally voting. |
| On September 9th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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this poem is lovely; completely well-written |
| On September 9th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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this poem is lovely
completely well-written |
| On September 6th 2007 loza801 Said : | |
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i like i like!
voting! |
| On August 23rd 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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I really like it & I voted. Sorry It took me awhile to read this, i havne't been online in a long time. But yes, I think this was good, I'm going to read osme of your other poems now. ^_^ |
| On August 22nd 2007 Michelle1444 Said : | |
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I voted & I love it. I like all yer poems u neva make shitty ones =] |
| On August 17th 2007 Gumby12323498 Said : | |
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wow. this is good. |
| On August 10th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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omggggg..WOW..i love it..nice poem!! |
| On August 7th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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hmmmm..... wonder what the test results were????.. ^_O......... very intersting take,, i liked the intensity u got thu in it,, very nicely done,, ,left a bit of mystery at the end,, ^__^.... goodies! XD |
| On August 7th 2007 lostmyfaith84 Said : | |
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you have talent keep it up |
| On August 6th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love this-the anxiousness of it...I think that the last line is very sweet. Great job expressing some tough, confusing feelings! |
| On August 5th 2007 cassiegiraffe Said : | |
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your writing is very emotional. i like your style. |
| On August 4th 2007 sophiepinkfair Said : | |
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this is really really good it makes you empathize with the speaker....and such a different topic too. the last line is my favourite |
| On August 4th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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great work |
| On August 3rd 2007 Chandapanda08 Said : | |
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i love it! |
| On August 3rd 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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oh dear. I LOVED this one! with a passion. =] |
| On August 3rd 2007 undiie Said : | |
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I like it! Its really good. =]
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| On August 3rd 2007 MikieScene1 Said : | |
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I hope you like it, please rate it if you do, comment even if you don't vote it please? |


