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Created: 07/24 2007
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Category: Passion

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Camaro

My eyes are sharply fixed on the asphalt stretched before me

It's only been a moment but already I can taste the glory.

I grasp it tight, this leather bound wheel of death

And shutter deep in my chest with every fuel injected breath.

More deadly the risk of mistakes with every line the needle takes.

Now with sweaty palms and heart beats and the tires began to swell

As gravel tings off my chariots cold steel shell,

I hear the engines song "My 400 horsepower trip to hell".

The smell of rubber and road still hang thick in the air

Black stripes left on a road to be past by without a care.

But I'll remember every second, every minute and more

With the wind in my face and the gas to the floor.

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On October 3rd 2007 emochic4lyfe Said: 
emochic4lyfe cars-unique-notnormally used-that was cool tho....i liked it.. you did good...l*TORIE
On September 5th 2007 stjimmie13 Said: 
stjimmie13 kick ass
On August 25th 2007 BreastLove69 Said: 
BreastLove69 Awesome*
On August 25th 2007 BreastLove69 Said: 
BreastLove69 Awesom job dear.
On August 1st 2007 cassiegiraffe Said: 
cassiegiraffe lol at showmeboobsbit. wtf. i liked the poem. very very good imagery, but the meter doesn't always quite line up. either that, or i wasn't reading it quite right. good job.
On July 29th 2007 sophiepinkfair Said: 
sophiepinkfair yeah. what he said "Strong words from an obviously strong woman." haha. you did really well with this one. its so vivid. i like all the little things you've put in that you dont notice when you first read it, like fore example calling it a chariot.
On July 29th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said: 
DIXIEDEVILWEND DO U EVER WRITE ANYTHING THAT SUCKS? LOL. ANOTHER GOOD ONE AND GOOD JOB ON BREAKING FREE FROKM YOUR USUAL.
On July 28th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said: 
xxlostsoul14xx I'm not really into cars, but good imagerey!
On July 27th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang meh,, i'm not much into cars,, but,,, well,, ur depiction of the feel and scenary is 'mazing!..... WOOT!.... nice wording,, great flow,,, terrbly fantastic rhymers... XD... i'll admit,, it's really good for a poem about cars,,, hmmm?........ lol,,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On July 26th 2007 Andrini19 Said: 
Andrini19 man, this poem is damn good. Almost as badass as a Camaro.
On July 25th 2007 undiie Said: 
undiie I love it. The first poem about a car that I've ever liked. =]
On July 25th 2007 MikieScene1 Said: 
MikieScene1 I AM A GUY....the girl in the pic is my girlfriend. when was that last time you met a girl named mike?
On July 25th 2007 showmeboobsbit Said: 
my picture
Strong words from an obviously strong woman. You have talent, good luck with the writing
On July 25th 2007 xXFARYLUVXx Said: 
xXFARYLUVXx that's really good!
On July 25th 2007 loza801 Said: 
my picture
love it !1 and i dont even like cars!
On July 25th 2007 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane I thought you did a great job with this one...Very unique topic..It seems to me that this goes a little deeper than just a simple car, but that's just me. Anyhow-good job!
On July 25th 2007 mrskritter Said: 
mrskritter nice work
On July 24th 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg This is an awesome poem....I had a 1986 Iroc Z28 Camaro, 5 speed. I loved burning rubber in my baby. Then my ex-husband stole it and sold it and I am still crying because I miss my baby so much. My dream car is the muscle 1968 Camaro. I will own one some day.
On July 24th 2007 LinLin030988 Said: 
LinLin030988 No muscle cars for me (got an Eclipse, lil rice burner.. heh heh) But I want a Camaro, and this is an interesting poem topic, something I haven't seen before. GOOD ONE.
On July 24th 2007 atothedogg Said: 
atothedogg good job...I dont think i've read a poem that has to do with a car. very uncommon. keep ^ the good work... xXAshXx
On July 24th 2007 stics917 Said: 
stics917 wow dude i really like this
On July 24th 2007 soothmysoul Said: 
soothmysoul nice work! im soo impressed.
On July 24th 2007 phhs2010marie Said: 
phhs2010marie seriously now. thats probably the best one I've read. no lie. mmm yesh. I like this one a lot =]
On July 24th 2007 individulsong Said: 
individulsong i love this! Trully talented. great work!
On July 24th 2007 babycrzzy Said: 
babycrzzy awesome the title fits it so well great job