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Created:
07/24 2007
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Category:
Passion
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The Question |
Camaro
My eyes are sharply fixed on the asphalt stretched before me
It's only been a moment but already I can taste the glory.
I grasp it tight, this leather bound wheel of death
And shutter deep in my chest with every fuel injected breath.
More deadly the risk of mistakes with every line the needle takes.
Now with sweaty palms and heart beats and the tires began to swell
As gravel tings off my chariots cold steel shell,
I hear the engines song "My 400 horsepower trip to hell".
The smell of rubber and road still hang thick in the air
Black stripes left on a road to be past by without a care.
But I'll remember every second, every minute and more
With the wind in my face and the gas to the floor.
| On October 3rd 2007 emochic4lyfe Said: |
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| cars-unique-notnormally used-that was cool tho....i liked it.. you did good...l*TORIE |
| On September 5th 2007 stjimmie13 Said: |
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| kick ass |
| On August 25th 2007 BreastLove69 Said: |
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| Awesome* |
| On August 25th 2007 BreastLove69 Said: |
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| Awesom job dear. |
| On August 1st 2007 cassiegiraffe Said: |
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| lol at showmeboobsbit. wtf. i liked the poem. very very good imagery, but the meter doesn't always quite line up. either that, or i wasn't reading it quite right. good job. |
| On July 29th 2007 sophiepinkfair Said: |
| On July 29th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said: |
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| DO U EVER WRITE ANYTHING THAT SUCKS? LOL. ANOTHER GOOD ONE AND GOOD JOB ON BREAKING FREE FROKM YOUR USUAL. |
| On July 28th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said: |
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| I'm not really into cars, but good imagerey! |
| On July 27th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| On July 26th 2007 Andrini19 Said: |
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| man, this poem is damn good. Almost as badass as a Camaro. |
| On July 25th 2007 undiie Said: |
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| I love it. The first poem about a car that I've ever liked. =] |
| On July 25th 2007 MikieScene1 Said: |
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| I AM A GUY....the girl in the pic is my girlfriend. when was that last time you met a girl named mike? |
| On July 25th 2007 showmeboobsbit Said: |
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| Strong words from an obviously strong woman. You have talent, good luck with the writing |
| On July 25th 2007 xXFARYLUVXx Said: |
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| that's really good! |
| On July 25th 2007 loza801 Said: |
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| love it !1
and i dont even like cars! |
| On July 25th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
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| I thought you did a great job with this one...Very unique topic..It seems to me that this goes a little deeper than just a simple car, but that's just me. Anyhow-good job! |
| On July 25th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
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| nice work |
| On July 24th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| On July 24th 2007 LinLin030988 Said: |
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| No muscle cars for me (got an Eclipse, lil rice burner.. heh heh) But I want a Camaro, and this is an interesting poem topic, something I haven't seen before. GOOD ONE. |
| On July 24th 2007 atothedogg Said: |
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| good job...I dont think i've read a poem that has to do with a car. very uncommon. keep ^ the good work...
xXAshXx |
| On July 24th 2007 stics917 Said: |
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| wow dude i really like this |
| On July 24th 2007 soothmysoul Said: |
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| nice work! im soo impressed. |
| On July 24th 2007 phhs2010marie Said: |
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| seriously now. thats probably the best one I've read. no lie. mmm yesh. I like this one a lot =] |
| On July 24th 2007 individulsong Said: |
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| i love this! Trully talented. great work! |
| On July 24th 2007 babycrzzy Said: |
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| awesome the title fits it so well great job |


