Never
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Created on 7-14-07
I hear the phone ring,
I pray to god its you.
My butterflies in my heart flutter but,
the other line is silenced,
I beg you, say something anything
Again my wish is granted,
my stomach churns and
my smile diminishes, as my heart sinks.
Theres that feeling again,
like I'm falling.
I feel my hand leave yours,
and I now all i feel is cold.
I wish to hold you once again,
praying that I'll get lucky.
Then I realize I never had you to hold.......
Please Login to post comments| On July 26th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said : | |
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short buts its good =) |
| On October 1st 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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very nicely written.......i like it |
| On August 23rd 2007 ellies15 Said : | |
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awwww its sad but i really like it. |
| On July 19th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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It's sad but really really good. |
| On July 17th 2007 FruitPunch15 Said : | |
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i like it |
| On July 17th 2007 crazkoala Said : | |
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very sad, but again, very well written. write more soon, your poetry is amazing! =) |
| On July 17th 2007 cuteness66 Said : | |
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awe.. that seems sad.. but i get it.. I mean i can
relate to this poem.. its good though.. |
| On July 17th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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"and i know all i feel is cold",,,,,,,,,, awww,, very sadly sweet,, the expression and imagery is profound and just plays out smoothly,, great job,,, ~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
