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Holding on, to what I now know as love.Rate this Poem
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Created on 11-5-07
Holding on, to what I now know as love. Teen love. Unspoken fights are yelled through the night. Whispers are heard as I brush my fingers threw your wonderful, smooth hair. Not knowing, what to say. Just enjoying what we have made. A mess in the sheets of my bed. What a lovely sight. A Fantastic smell runs across the room. Leaving last nights sex in the past. I think I love her.
Please Login to post comments| On January 2nd 2008 AnnaWithrow Said : | |
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I liked it. :] |
| On November 17th 2007 Kimmyburly Said : | |
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thats great; for it being so short; |
| On November 10th 2007 kagome77 Said : | |
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woah, those are some strong words. I love :) |
| On November 10th 2007 Ericnessxo Said : | |
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=) awe. i think its cute. at least your not a guy who sleeps with her then leaves her. Dont ever be like that bud. POWER RANGERS!! |
| On November 9th 2007 missykitty1 Said : | |
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It may be real short but its really strong and has alot of meaning....god job! |
| On November 9th 2007 missykitty1 Said : | |
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It may be real hort but its really strong and has alot of meaning....god job! |
| On November 8th 2007 NickyAKAEmiko Said : | |
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Wow... So I am guessing your not a Virgin...? Right?
Not saying it is a bad thing... but yeah... Most of my friends have had it... and they loved it...
I wish I had a guy, i think I do, that said this kinda stuff, if we were to do this... |
| On November 5th 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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wow. LOVE. tis an amazing thing. such an amazing poem Mister Michael =]] |
| On November 5th 2007 TheQueirdo Said : | |
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dude, its really strong. |
| On November 5th 2007 whore69hoe Said : | |
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i think this is a pretty cool poem going to look at your other ones now !!! what do u think about mine? |
| On November 5th 2007 blargh15 Said : | |
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wow... |
