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Next June |
The best fall of your life
Love me when you're broken.
Love me when you're down.
Love me when you're hurtin'.
Love me when I'm not around.
Holding in your cry.
Hard to understand why.
Let that tear drop baby.
It's the best fall of life.
I'll be sure to catch that baby.
While falling the best fall of our life.
To her. <3
| On August 14th 2008 atavanhalen Said : | |
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You seem too good to be true... Just saying... |
| On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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lucky girl. i wanna fall too |
| On January 2nd 2008 AnnaWithrow Said : | |
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I like when you said, "I'll be sure to catch that baby." It was really sweet. :] |
| On November 3rd 2007 NaughtyGirl496 Said : | |
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This one is my favorite. =] |
| On October 28th 2007 Darkenedsoul21 Said : | |
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wow that's good! |
| On October 28th 2007 missykitty1 Said : | |
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Thats really good.
For her eh?
U should tell her how u feel...
Otherwise nuttin will happen if u dont try... |
| On October 28th 2007 MrKeesee Said : | |
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Go you dude, that rules. I didn't realize there were other guys out there that still understood the value of being sweet. |
| On October 27th 2007 kagome77 Said : | |
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awww your such a sweetie ♥ :) |
| On October 27th 2007 brittanyeagle Said : | |
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shes a veryyyyyy lucky girl. |
| On October 27th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. It's so good. I love the line "Let that tear drop baby." Great job. |
| On October 27th 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said : | |
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Aww, that was sweet. She's very lucky. |
| On October 27th 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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i love this..its really sweet. i especially love the last line --> "while falling the best fall of our life." |


