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Drink Me Up
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Created on 10-25-07
A lovely breeze, brushes across her face.
Oh.. how beatiful she looks in that moon light.
Should I tell her I'm in love with her.
I start to open my mouth then back down.
"Coward." I whisper to myself.
She glances at me with her wonderful eyes.
Nothing to do but... kiss the lips I've been dreaming about.
Nothing to do but... move closer, and wait for the heat to build up.
Then, it just happens.
I start to lean in.
She turns away.
"What?" I think to myself. "Doesn't she like me?"
I turn her head back my way.
She looks into my eyes with questions.
I move closer to her then slow things down.
I press my lips lightly against hers.
We just sink into it like quick sand.
Our lips seperate from each other.
I watch as she smiles.
"Tonight is the night baby, the begining of our life. So drink me up, drink me up good." I whisper in her ear.
Oh.. how beatiful she looks in that moon light.
Should I tell her I'm in love with her.
I start to open my mouth then back down.
"Coward." I whisper to myself.
She glances at me with her wonderful eyes.
Nothing to do but... kiss the lips I've been dreaming about.
Nothing to do but... move closer, and wait for the heat to build up.
Then, it just happens.
I start to lean in.
She turns away.
"What?" I think to myself. "Doesn't she like me?"
I turn her head back my way.
She looks into my eyes with questions.
I move closer to her then slow things down.
I press my lips lightly against hers.
We just sink into it like quick sand.
Our lips seperate from each other.
I watch as she smiles.
"Tonight is the night baby, the begining of our life. So drink me up, drink me up good." I whisper in her ear.
Please Login to post comments| On January 2nd 2008 AnnaWithrow Said : | |
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WOW!! I loved this one a lot. It was like I was really there. :] |
| On December 14th 2007 dark013angel Said : | |
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beauiful, i love the word choice, and imagery. plus, i like how you can feel the poem..the emotion behind it..great work. |
| On November 6th 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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I agree with Naughtygirl496.....I love this poem with a passion Mister Michael =]] |
| On November 3rd 2007 NaughtyGirl496 Said : | |
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awww, i wish i was herrr, =[[[ |
| On October 27th 2007 kagome77 Said : | |
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wow. this made me flashback to a time when that happend to me.. jeez man, you knoe me so well.. haha
"Coward." |
| On October 27th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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It's so good. I love it. You really have an amazing way with words. |
| On October 27th 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said : | |
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Loved it. |
| On October 25th 2007 brittanyeagle Said : | |
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i love this!
its rele good!
yer amazing at writing.
:P |
