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Next June |
After The Fight
Don't take this out on me because you chose a jerk to love
Don't hate me because I tried to help you but you wouldn't let me
Don't get pissed and hit me because I was doing the right thing
Don't forget who saved your ass when you about lost it at that party
Don't fuck with me because you have nothing better to do
Don't tell me that you love me unless you know for sure that it's true
Don't expect a friend to hold you when you feel like crying your eyes out
Don't call if you're just going to yell at me for something I didn't do
Don't kiss me if you're not willing to miss me when I'm gone
Don't hate me because I tried to help you but you wouldn't let me
Don't get pissed and hit me because I was doing the right thing
Don't forget who saved your ass when you about lost it at that party
Don't fuck with me because you have nothing better to do
Don't tell me that you love me unless you know for sure that it's true
Don't expect a friend to hold you when you feel like crying your eyes out
Don't call if you're just going to yell at me for something I didn't do
Don't kiss me if you're not willing to miss me when I'm gone
| On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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this is my favorite by you, awesome job! I love this so much |
| On January 2nd 2008 AnnaWithrow Said : | |
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I like it. :] |
| On November 10th 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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oh jeebus. what happend sweetie? I dont like this...person..if it is you that was hurt. Nice emotion tho. |
| On November 3rd 2007 NaughtyGirl496 Said : | |
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Wow, this one was very good! |
| On October 27th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. Very well written. I love it. It has so much depth, emotion, and power behind it all. |
| On October 27th 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said : | |
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I love your style of writing. Your poems are very powerful. =] |
| On October 23rd 2007 MaySpace12 Said : | |
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WoW ,
This Is so meaningfull |
| On October 20th 2007 kagome77 Said : | |
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wow. this is really powerful stuff
You outdid yourself hun! |
| On October 20th 2007 missykitty1 Said : | |
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Well written...
U have a unique style!
I cant get enough! |


