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Jerks

Views (327) Other Created on 10-16-07 Flag

He tells you he loves you
You know it's just a line
He's so sweet to you
But you won't give him any of your time
He tells you he thinks about you, all threw the night
You tell him to fuck off, because you know he isn't right
He keeps trying anyway
And once he gets your trust
You'll just be another girl he screwed over, laying in the dust

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On August 14th 2008 atavanhalen Said :
atavanhalen Brill
On January 2nd 2008 AnnaWithrow Said :
AnnaWithrow This is very true. I like the way you use words. I mean, you're very good with words. You know how to use them and you know how to make a girl smile. :]
On November 10th 2007 phhs2010marie Said :
phhs2010marie ...*sigh* unfortunately that one hits close to home. gahh. still amazing tho.
On November 3rd 2007 NaughtyGirl496 Said :
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A agree. You are good at writing poetry.
On October 27th 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said :
NicoleSmith159 Nice.
On October 19th 2007 pruetta Said :
pruetta you are very good at capturing the real-ness of life and making it sound beautiful.....lol that is the most serious i have ever been! but man you are good
On October 18th 2007 Darkenedsoul21 Said :
Darkenedsoul21 Your so right! That's all guys do get your trust then the screw you over! Great piece! Nice job!
On October 18th 2007 kaisermage Said :
kaisermage completely true but not all guys are like that actually most aren't
On October 17th 2007 kimmaigirlai Said :
kimmaigirlai wooow. deep man. deep. i hate guys like that, but most are like that.
who knew someone could be hott AND incredibly talented??
On October 17th 2007 brittanyeagle Said :
brittanyeagle i know exactly how this feels, i love thiss! its rle good. :P
On October 17th 2007 kagome77 Said :
kagome77 you truly are amazing. this poem reminds me of someone who did that to me, NOT IMPORTANT lol but yea i think you did awesome with this poem! great work! :)
On October 17th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv "He keeps trying anyway". That line is exactly what they do. He'll tell you anything and everything. He'll be the most convincing son of a bitch you've ever met, and then he'll screw you over backwards like a bitch. I love that this is so raw....I feel the hurt, the anger, and the struggle alone all in this poem. GREAT piece!! I love it.
On October 17th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. It's very powerful. Kinda reminds me of something I'm going through right now. Great job. I love it.
On October 16th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic There's something really powerful about this! I know a lot of people on all ends of this, Awesome work!
On October 16th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz wow... this poem really hit me hard. i dated a guy like this once. and your poem detailed every cut and bruise he gave me. this really is incredible.
On October 16th 2007 Burnley14 Said :
Burnley14 Powerful. It makes me want to run outside and beat the crap out of my brother, cousin, and/or one of his little friends. (But only cause they are the closest male asses to me)