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Smile Gorgeous
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Created on 10-13-07
You're to beautiful to be unloved or broken. To beatiful to have scars. You shouldn't feel used or hated. To put yourself down like that might cause sarrow, but I'll be there to whip those tears away. You're to great to be unwanted. I'll make all the pain fade into an emotion of love. You're hurt and lonley, but soon you wont be. Yes, tragedy might be dragging you down right now, but soon you will find me dragging you out. Emo is just a feeling that everyone feels once in awhile. Don't let that bring you down. Smile gorgeous. Smile like you have never smiled before.
Please Login to post comments| On January 2nd 2008 AnnaWithrow Said : | |
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Aww, I like this. |
| On November 10th 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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good lord this is amazing. so very true with your words. =]] |
| On November 3rd 2007 NaughtyGirl496 Said : | |
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awwww |
| On October 27th 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said : | |
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Awwww =] |
| On October 19th 2007 pruetta Said : | |
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very good......thats all i can say right now.....i am a slow comprehender not realy i just thought...never mind dude it was good |
| On October 17th 2007 2xoxashleyxox2 Said : | |
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Awww this is so sweet thnx so much I loved it. =D It made me smile |
| On October 17th 2007 kagome77 Said : | |
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you have a really nice way of saying stuff like that. i liked the line where you referred Emo as only being a feeling that people get once in a while
because that is truly how it is for me I love this poem! you really good! :) |
| On October 16th 2007 Burnley14 Said : | |
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I'll change the comments about this poem up a little bit...I say wow-ness to this one. Woahohoho...what now. (Yeah, I'm a rebel like that) I like this one it's sweet. |
| On October 15th 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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wow, its breathtaking...i love it |
| On October 14th 2007 brittanyeagle Said : | |
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this is wow.. |
| On October 13th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Sounds like something my friend would write for me...Beautiful! |
| On October 13th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Wow... I love it. It's so good. Great job. |
