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What I couldn't say

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I should have known when you turned your back and walked away, you didn't look back
I didn't know what to say. I was merely speechless, in awe of amazement. Gasp, my jaw dropped
did she kiss me? My heartstopped. Floating for a moment, my feet haven't touched the ground
for quite some time. My mind searching for the words to express what I want to say.
Oh, god. the jumble of words came out all wrong. So very wrong. Unable to conceive this
concrete evidence of some idea of what I meant. What I meant. What I meant you'll just never
know, And it's all my fault. The memory of the day, the month and the year still haunts me but
don't flatter yourself sweetheart. I haven't shed one tear.
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On August 14th 2008 atavanhalen Said :
atavanhalen I adore, adore, adore this.
On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop WOW.
On January 2nd 2008 AnnaWithrow Said :
AnnaWithrow I agree with everyone under me. This is great!!! :]
On December 30th 2007 mylullaby01 Said :
mylullaby01 I love it!
On November 10th 2007 phhs2010marie Said :
phhs2010marie I agree wiff Kagome..mmm I always love the things you write. =]]
On November 3rd 2007 NaughtyGirl496 Said :
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Wow! This one really touched me. I loved it.
On October 27th 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said :
NicoleSmith159 This is my favorite one you've written.
On October 20th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Bleeeeeeepblooooopblaaaaappp
On October 19th 2007 Dctalkgirl1990 Said :
Dctalkgirl1990 amazing
On October 17th 2007 kagome77 Said :
kagome77 holy cow, i freaking love this poem! i liked how you repeated the line for emphasis "what i meant" that happens to me all the time, my words jumble and it comes out all wrong, like in your poem but i like that at then end of it your like "don't flatter yourself sweetheart. I haven't shed one tear." utterly amazing.
On October 14th 2007 Trena09 Said :
Trena09 i love this poem... great way to express your feelings!
On October 14th 2007 brittanyeagle Said :
brittanyeagle i love this!!!! its rele good. :)
On October 13th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Amazing. I absolutely love it. Great job.
On October 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 you expressed it really well. i like it
On October 13th 2007 2xoxashleyxox2 Said :
2xoxashleyxox2 sad but great i liked how you used the Italics and Bolds and Underlines to make it more dramatic =D
On October 13th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv There's nothing I can say to point out the obvious perfection of this poem. I've never found a perfect scribe before...until now. Everything about it....WOW! I love it!
On October 13th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz wow. i love how you used the italics, underlines, and bolds to accent the words. this is awesome. you really have talent.
On October 13th 2007 Burnley14 Said :
Burnley14 I like that it was easy to see what was going on in the poem, a lot of people kinda push words together and hope they sound pretty (i'm probably one of them..hah) This one's cool.
On October 13th 2007 pruetta Said :
pruetta awesome
On October 12th 2007 safeharbour13 Said :
safeharbour13 awesome!