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Revised version of "Midnight Hound"Rate this Poem
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Haterful Skies |
Protection of the Hound
Coal demon eyes like vacuums of shadows
In alleys of tinted paws and dull-silver claws
Meat-tearing fags snarl through his leather lips
Vibrating “absolution” from a million shattering howls
A hound built as sturdy as Cerberus’s chains
Racing a blur past families of pursued gazelle
Sniffing with omnipotence the caverns of society
Picking scraps of discord from arson and treason
Rumored in the underworld; fabled as a beast
Tracking bounties of vigilance, chaos, and destruction
Protecting defenseless towns from foreseen massacres
By roaring the face off cowardly instigation
Beloved by the townsfolk who sleep in his comfort
Offering gratitude pets and nourishing-raw steak
He answers back with a tongue-lick of promise
To uphold justice in the midnights of turmoil
| On August 21st 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
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| So this is my revised version of my poem "Midnight Hound" so please give me some comments if it looks better or worse and just how it is. Thank you |


