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“Sew the seams,” the seamstress said “Rate this Poem
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Madam Seamstress
Madam Seamstress
“Sew the seams,” the seamstress said
“His lies are fine with lips of red
Shiny scissors and thickened thread
And he shall soon be dead”
The needle pierced into my flesh
“Draw the blood”, the taste was fresh
She wove my lips, her humble mesh
I was spinning in my head
“Weave the eyes to lock them shut
He sees no poverty but feels the cut”
Her scissors traced around my chest
And I vomited out the seams
“Snip the ears, they have to go
He couldn’t hear the orphans’ woe”
I fainted sitting, bound by rope
But she shook me from my dream
“TEAR the heart that couldn’t beat
And CUT the feet that walked on cleats
SLICE the throat that up and choked
When they asked him for some food”
I couldn’t yell, the pain was hell
On every mistake I was forced to dwell
My heart was pulled, my head then fell
And thus our story concludes
They call her Madam Seamstress
She sews men, dusk till dawn
With needle, thread, and distress
She will mend you of your wrong
| On August 7th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: |
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| Wow, Aaron! Sorry I didn't read this before... I can definitely see why you won. Great job!!! |
| On August 6th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| Very interesting |
| On August 3rd 2009 DayumItsMikey Said: |
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| Ha! It's my favorite poem! :D Good job as always |
| On July 30th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: |
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| it was awesome man!!! great job seriously~! |
| On July 27th 2009 mOOnLyteKyss Said: |
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| That was really good. *Thumbs up* |
| On July 27th 2009 CassieZ Said: |
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| I liked it, very good :) |
| On July 27th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: |
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| I liked how I could visualize it and feel it...it really pulled me in |
| On July 27th 2009 AvengeNovember Said: |
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| All I can say is that I felt it. Excellent job, again. :] |
| On July 27th 2009 inkstar1 Said: |
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| nice poem scary XP |
| On July 27th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| the new dubbed king of poetry... does not cling to analogies... but does as please... COOKIE CUTTER FRESHNESS >> ryhme scheme was tight... sentences were mismatched and different... was sown tight |
| On July 27th 2009 ADreamersWorld Said: |
| On July 27th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
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| Please, i dont care about votes but please comment, tell me what you liked, what you didnt like, help me improve |


