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“Sew the seams,” the seamstress said “

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Created: 07/27 2009
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Category: Fear

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Madam Seamstress

Madam Seamstress

“Sew the seams,” the seamstress said
“His lies are fine with lips of red
Shiny scissors and thickened thread
And he shall soon be dead”

The needle pierced into my flesh
“Draw the blood”,  the taste was fresh
She wove my lips, her humble mesh
I was spinning in my head

“Weave the eyes to lock them shut
He sees no poverty but feels the cut”
Her scissors traced around my chest
And I vomited out the seams

“Snip the ears, they have to go
He couldn’t hear the orphans’ woe”
I fainted sitting, bound by rope
But she shook me from my dream

“TEAR the heart that couldn’t beat
And CUT the feet that walked on cleats
SLICE the throat that up and choked
When they asked him for some food”

I couldn’t yell, the pain was hell
On every mistake I was forced to dwell
My heart was pulled, my head then fell
And thus our story concludes

They call her Madam Seamstress
She sews men, dusk till dawn
With needle, thread, and distress
She will mend you of your wrong

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On August 7th 2009 NitneyRenee Said: 
NitneyRenee Wow, Aaron! Sorry I didn't read this before... I can definitely see why you won. Great job!!!
On August 6th 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Very interesting
On August 3rd 2009 DayumItsMikey Said: 
DayumItsMikey Ha! It's my favorite poem! :D Good job as always
On July 30th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: 
Fairiesrule112 it was awesome man!!! great job seriously~!
On July 27th 2009 mOOnLyteKyss Said: 
mOOnLyteKyss That was really good. *Thumbs up*
On July 27th 2009 CassieZ Said: 
CassieZ I liked it, very good :)
On July 27th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 I liked how I could visualize it and feel it...it really pulled me in
On July 27th 2009 AvengeNovember Said: 
AvengeNovember All I can say is that I felt it. Excellent job, again. :]
On July 27th 2009 inkstar1 Said: 
inkstar1 nice poem scary XP
On July 27th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
XXFictitiousXX the new dubbed king of poetry... does not cling to analogies... but does as please... COOKIE CUTTER FRESHNESS >> ryhme scheme was tight... sentences were mismatched and different... was sown tight
On July 27th 2009 ADreamersWorld Said: 
ADreamersWorld well i liked it. ^.^ the only problem i could honestly say i found with it was that some lines sort of didn't flow with the rest of it. like the end of the second stanza and the end of the 5th stanza. But it was good. :D
On July 27th 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies Please, i dont care about votes but please comment, tell me what you liked, what you didnt like, help me improve