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Bees swarm around her hazel comb eyesRate this Poem
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Created:
07/21 2009
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63
Category:
Pain
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The Queen’s Love Letters
The Queen’s Love Letters
Bees swarm around her hazel comb eyes
Buzzing near honey glazed earrings
That drip splatters to her old love letters
Clutched in sticky stung fingers
She once was called queen by all here peers
Before kicked into the human’s world
Now she just walks from hive to hive
Peering into what she used to know
They sting her, relentlessly
As she tries to climb in
But she cards out the stingers
And tries once more
First goes the head, bloody with pain
Then her swollen purple neck
Slowly she crawls into the hive
By dropping the letters sent by her king
Please Login to post comments| On July 24th 2009 ThruOnesEyes Said: |
| "Why'd you do this when you could've done this?" Asks the audience.
"It's my poetic license." Replies the artist. |
| On July 21st 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| its my poetic license. When removig stingers you often scrape the sting with a credit card to sort of pry it or dig it out so I said cards |
| On July 21st 2009 LastWariorPoet Said: |
| This is another decent poem. I am curious as to what you were trying to say in the 3rd line of the 3rd stanza since the word "cards" is a noun and you were attempting to use it as a verb. Did you mean carves? Otherwise, good imagery and inflection. |
| On July 21st 2009 Bellaboo09 Said: |
| you didnt post our poem....:( but this is good |
| On July 21st 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
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| Comment, Critique and Vote Please |
