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For all you fake ass emo goth mofos

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Created: 07/01 2009
Views: 391
Category: Anger

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Flight After Twilight

Flight after Twilight

You’re a tooth decay
Dagger of the mind rape
Filed like a fang
On the notebook of fate
Dried blood stains
The sleeves of your veins
While the skin heals the marks
When your failed to be slain

Bolted down with chains
Are the ties to your dreams
Where the leeches suck sex
Behind eye of the vain
Parasite to twilight
In a Meyer slaughter scene
It’s a burning of the     bible
Though you claim to believe

So don’t slug to me
The diary your wrote
Your not my standard pen
To depict your cracked throat
I’ll write you a poem
As you fly off this bridge
Theres no second chances
And I hope you don’t cringe

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On July 24th 2009 FryTleRipdAprt Said: 
FryTleRipdAprt i like it alott.
On July 7th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: 
Fairiesrule112 lol this is pretty damn good man. i dunno..xD i would normally try and give better comments..but im not in my right mind today..
On July 5th 2009 lieseylandon Said: 
lieseylandon Cool
On July 2nd 2009 11Dreamgirl11 Said: 
11Dreamgirl11 wow.
On July 1st 2009 onaipwolf Said: 
onaipwolf I like it as well. You have some slant rhyming, but besides that, your rhythm and pace are nice. I also like your repetition of ideas to solidify your point. Overall, nicely done. ;)
On July 1st 2009 HotEmoNerd Said: 
HotEmoNerd I read it. It's amazing! I really like it. :]
On July 1st 2009 Vincentmetal Said: 
Vincentmetal Very untresting...I'm emo btw. =D
On July 1st 2009 stupiddiary Said: 
stupiddiary Sad sad sad that you give a toss.
On July 1st 2009 PROBETRO Said: 
PROBETRO cool
On July 1st 2009 unknowntragedy Said: 
unknowntragedy i like twilight, but this is still really good. : )
On July 1st 2009 RomeoInRuin Said: 
RomeoInRuin very clever. i like ur writing style. interesting imagery, but its a little short... u could really expound this out to be like an epic poem! O.o
On July 1st 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb interesting
On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies glad you liked my poem guys, sorry Anikal that you didnt. I would love comments on the quality of the poem too you know, what can I improve on and stuff?
On July 1st 2009 AnikaMoore Said: 
AnikaMoore I love twilight and I'm emo/punk/goth and you know what fuck you!
On July 1st 2009 Megolemanic Said: 
Megolemanic hoorah for wanna-be emo twilight obsessed freaks. kinda.
On July 1st 2009 toroc Said: 
toroc awesome poem and totally true. sign my petition? twilight sucks
On July 1st 2009 lovegurl90 Said: 
lovegurl90 this is good cuz i hate pplz lik that!!!!!so good for u
On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies I actually wasnt listening to anything when I wrote this. This is one of the few recent poems where I actually went through and edited my lines afterwords line by line whiched helped treendously. I might make a new version for tommorow and be a little more clever and absract with it though IDK if Ill just do this line by line or start a whole ne poem, thanks for the comment.
On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies thanks btw its "eyes" plurul, god I need to proofreed haha
On July 1st 2009 headbalisser Said: 
headbalisser damn straight!
On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies Thank you :)
On July 1st 2009 Sunloverz Said: 
Sunloverz Wow .. amazing!
On July 1st 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies Vote up if you agree with this or like like the poem