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Somthing I did while I was upsetRate this Poem
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Created:
11/30 2008
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632
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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River of Life |
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30
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Drowning Depression |
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22
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Bitter Heartache |
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A Worthless Penny |
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13
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Monster Hunt |
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Winter Memories |
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14
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Infant Sun |
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Healing and Grieving |
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Trapped in the Forest of Victoria |
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14
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Our Lot |
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14
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Rotted from the hate |
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10
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Angel of Humanity |
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13
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The Chill |
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15
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Useless Poetry? |
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Haterful Skies |
Drowning Depression
At times, I hear the whispers and screams
The quiet echoes fading into reality
And witness glimpses of you in dreams
You drain me of all my sanity
So submerge you I shall
And paint a smile with colorful ink
Broaden my shoulders and stand tall
Not letting them see the decrepit sink
Humble by word, alone I cry
And taste the salty tears of defeat
Afraid of the world beyond, I try
To balance using unstable feet
Yet in the mists I see a light
And hear her rushing footsteps draw near
They all came in the dead of night
To drown you and relive me of my fear.
Please Login to post comments| On August 18th 2009 kksarai09 Said: |
| *sigh* I wish I could write poetry this well. It's beautiful. |
| On July 24th 2009 FryTleRipdAprt Said: |
| i love this! im subbing haha |
| On July 8th 2009 jennyboricua1 Said: |
| amazing |
| On July 6th 2009 VampDarling Said: |
| I like it, very creative. |
| On July 4th 2009 deathafying666 Said: |
| thats so good |
| On July 1st 2009 onaipwolf Said: |
| This one is also fantastic. You have a very established sense of rhythm that a lot of writers on here lack. It makes for a very enjoyable read. Also, despite the sadness that permeates this particular piece of work, the ending seems quite hopeful. :) |
| On June 29th 2009 angeesseule Said: |
| Wow, i wrote a poem like yours before. I like your poem the ending is marvalous.
WHEN MY WORLD DARKENS:
It’s a hollow place,
I hear my relentless weeping in echoes,
sound like a variety of souls,
hurting simultaneously.
It’s always raining,
There I’m always alone.
It’s a frigid corner,
I can’t stop crying,
nor get up, move or get out,
gripped and vulnerable,
submissively captive...
Whats on your mind?
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| On June 28th 2009 RadDianaxx298 Said: |
| I know how that feels.. :/ |
| On June 8th 2009 getcorrupted Said: |
| This is amazing. |
| On June 1st 2009 Pilot808 Said: |
| Woah, it's good. Really good.
Very nice poem. :) |
| On January 7th 2009 HisGurl911 Said: |
| wow |
| On December 14th 2008 KunMisty Said: |
| nice |
| On December 7th 2008 psycoblackmonk Said: |
| im almost there
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| On December 4th 2008 transgenic Said: |
| Especially love the third stanza. |
| On December 3rd 2008 speederspider Said: |
| nice... |
| On November 30th 2008 11Dreamgirl11 Said: |
| OH GEE!! I love it. It comes to me, of the emotion. beautifully written |
| On November 30th 2008 Natusha2008 Said: |
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| I love this poem!! I love writing poetry myself. |
| On November 30th 2008 funnystar Said: |
| radd ! |
| On November 30th 2008 annabelle1791 Said: |
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| omg.... awww....i love it maui! |
| On November 30th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
| 'in the dead of night'... NICE:P |
