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Just some insperation I had, hope its goRate this Poem
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Created:
11/28 2008
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878
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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38
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River of Life |
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30
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Drowning Depression |
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22
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Bitter Heartache |
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21
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A Worthless Penny |
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13
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Monster Hunt |
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16
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Winter Memories |
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14
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Infant Sun |
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18
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Healing and Grieving |
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17
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Trapped in the Forest of Victoria |
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14
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Our Lot |
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14
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Rotted from the hate |
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10
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Angel of Humanity |
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13
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The Chill |
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15
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Useless Poetry? |
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8
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Haterful Skies |
River of Life
We embark on the river of life
And the current of time that flows
To paddle through all that we know
Ignoring the reflections of strife
Shadowed by the bridges of hope
And flooded by the tears of the rain
Struggling through the rapids of pain
We tie our friendship much like rope
Weaving through the rocks of self doubt
And gazing at the majestic deer
Enjoying the chirps that we hear
Forgetful of the previous year’s drought
Till we arrive at the solemn lake
Where journeys come to an end
And we drift away from our friends
At the bottom we slumber never to wake
| On July 18th 2009 ViableFate Said: |
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| very good, maui.
i like the emotional coloring.
the imagery.
and the ending.
this is like one of my poems called my river.
but this was superbb. |
| On July 7th 2009 Vexion15 Said: |
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| This makes me thing of Spring time in the forest |
| On July 7th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: |
| On July 3rd 2009 PhireTwirler Said: |
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| this is amazing |
| On July 3rd 2009 Vexion15 Said: |
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| I can tell you like you some dark poetry lol |
| On June 28th 2009 RadDianaxx298 Said: |
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| Awwwh :) |
| On June 11th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| I love inspiration poems. :) |
| On May 24th 2009 Amdusias Said: |
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| I prefer your work I've read till now,still,this is not bad,this is far from bad. Amazing talent :) |
| On March 19th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
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| I revised this poem countless times lol |
| On February 17th 2009 bingobritney Said: |
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| this is a really nice peom really well written! i can tell alot of thought went into this |
| On December 20th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said: |
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| you know I read on one of my friends pages that you wanted constructive critisism....but theres nothing I can say about this...really good bravo |
| On December 12th 2008 transgenic Said: |
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| This is great! |
| On December 2nd 2008 chelseaprice12 Said: |
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| this is inredible :D |
| On November 28th 2008 SummerxCyanide Said: |
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| good |
| On November 28th 2008 MauiWowies Said: |
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| thanks everyone, that was my first posted her but I have a few more in storage and a few more Im thinking about. I really appricate it |
| On November 28th 2008 Sloanly Said: |
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| On November 28th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
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| well that was some inspiration . that was pretty good |
| On November 28th 2008 DreamersApathy Said: |
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| that was beautiful i loved it |
| On November 28th 2008 Mogeygriffin Said: |
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| Quite lovely |
| On November 28th 2008 7mattlucas Said: |
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| this is what i needed to survive this day...thank you so much!!!! |
| On November 28th 2008 TayLuvsFrogs Said: |
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| es okay |
| On November 28th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
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| Changelings, Chapter 1 Part 1
Changelings, Chapter 1 Part 2 |
| On November 28th 2008 dorkofdoom Said: |
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| Ohhhhh, I really really like it. ^_^ It's so deep! |
| On November 28th 2008 MauiWowies Said: |
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| thank u so much |
| On November 28th 2008 annabelle1791 Said: |
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| i like it =] |


