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Just some insperation I had, hope its go

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Created: 11/28 2008
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Category: Passion

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River of Life

We embark on the river of life
And the current of time that flows
To paddle through all that we know
Ignoring the reflections of strife

Shadowed by the bridges of hope
And flooded by the tears of the rain
Struggling through the rapids of pain
We tie our friendship much like rope

Weaving through the rocks of self doubt
And gazing at the majestic deer
Enjoying the chirps that we hear
Forgetful of the previous year’s drought

Till we arrive at the solemn lake
Where journeys come to an end
And we drift away from our friends
At the bottom we slumber never to wake

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On July 18th 2009 ViableFate Said: 
ViableFate very good, maui. i like the emotional coloring. the imagery. and the ending. this is like one of my poems called my river. but this was superbb.
On July 7th 2009 Vexion15 Said: 
Vexion15 This makes me thing of Spring time in the forest
On July 7th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: 
Fairiesrule112 I am not really one to rhyme my poems the way i used to, but i see you do..its not really rhyming..but eh xD close enough. i really love how oyu use the words, and make them all flow together! you're quite amazing at writing!
On July 3rd 2009 PhireTwirler Said: 
PhireTwirler this is amazing
On July 3rd 2009 Vexion15 Said: 
Vexion15 I can tell you like you some dark poetry lol
On June 28th 2009 RadDianaxx298 Said: 
RadDianaxx298 Awwwh :)
On June 11th 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb I love inspiration poems. :)
On May 24th 2009 Amdusias Said: 
Amdusias I prefer your work I've read till now,still,this is not bad,this is far from bad. Amazing talent :)
On March 19th 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies I revised this poem countless times lol
On February 17th 2009 bingobritney Said: 
bingobritney this is a really nice peom really well written! i can tell alot of thought went into this
On December 20th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said: 
adammckiel2000 you know I read on one of my friends pages that you wanted constructive critisism....but theres nothing I can say about this...really good bravo
On December 12th 2008 transgenic Said: 
transgenic This is great!
On December 2nd 2008 chelseaprice12 Said: 
chelseaprice12 this is inredible :D
On November 28th 2008 SummerxCyanide Said: 
SummerxCyanide good
On November 28th 2008 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies thanks everyone, that was my first posted her but I have a few more in storage and a few more Im thinking about. I really appricate it
On November 28th 2008 Sloanly Said: 
Sloanly
lots of imagery. i loved it. ^_^
On November 28th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 well that was some inspiration . that was pretty good
On November 28th 2008 DreamersApathy Said: 
DreamersApathy that was beautiful i loved it
On November 28th 2008 Mogeygriffin Said: 
Mogeygriffin Quite lovely
On November 28th 2008 7mattlucas Said: 
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this is what i needed to survive this day...thank you so much!!!!
On November 28th 2008 TayLuvsFrogs Said: 
TayLuvsFrogs es okay
On November 28th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: 
Lovelyeyes0 Changelings, Chapter 1 Part 1
Changelings, Chapter 1 Part 2
On November 28th 2008 dorkofdoom Said: 
dorkofdoom Ohhhhh, I really really like it. ^_^ It's so deep!
On November 28th 2008 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies thank u so much
On November 28th 2008 annabelle1791 Said: 
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i like it =]