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Tell me how far I can go.

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Created: 10/19 2009
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Category: Lyric

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Rabbit Hole

Tell me how far I can go.
Do you know?
The end moves too slow
And middles move too fast.
Because in this box,
There's only one way out,
Down the rabbit hole.
This box is hot, suffocating.
But in the end, it's far too cold.

I'd walk with the Walrus,
And we'll come if you call us,
But the time to talk
Isn't here yet.
I need you to tell me
How far I can go.
I need you to tell me,
If ever do you know.
I still remember the future
And forever the past...
Because the end move too slow
And middles move to fast.
But we never have time for beginnings.

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On November 5th 2009 LNforever Said: 
LNforever I love how sort of whimsical this is! Greatness!
On October 28th 2009 69dillon69 Said: 
69dillon69 wow. thats aweomse :) nice work
On October 21st 2009 MCRsLover Said: 
MCRsLover lol, thanx marĂ­a-marisa!
On October 21st 2009 chickp96 Said: 
chickp96 Tell me how far I can go... This has made me think.
On October 19th 2009 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem It's cute I really enjoyed reading it! :)