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I'm not used to being so without you,Rate this Poem
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Created:
04/07 2009
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126
Category:
Lyric
My Poems
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20
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Farewell |
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Invisible |
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Darkest of Hearts |
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Loving You |
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The Rise, and the Fall |
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If You Noticed |
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Black Roses |
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Return the Favor...To You |
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A Reach for Happiness |
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*Sigh* |
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11
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Calm... |
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Insignificant to You |
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You Can't Tell Me I'm Wrong |
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Is it So? |
Fell
I'm not used to being
So without you.
I'm not used to this,
Being on the B-list.
You made me rise,
You watched me fall.
I lost it all,
I lost it all.
Have you ever felt so alone?
Sticks and stones,
Words can hurt so much more
Than those.
You made me rise,
You kicked me down
Until I fell.
Are you done?
Is this over?
I truly can't tell.
I still remember when life was going so well.
Please Login to post comments| On April 28th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| *if that makes sense* |
| On April 28th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| wow. very good. impressive work. short and powerfully sweet |
| On April 12th 2009 necm2011 Said: |
| It does kind of read like a song!!! I loved it though! check out my stoires as well when you have time...... KMP |
| On April 10th 2009 search4me Said: |
| Very, very good. I wasn't sure at the start if I'd like this but I definitely do. It kinda reads like a song too. |
| On April 8th 2009 LNforever Said: |
| I totally got that, luvluvluv! I like the occasional rhymes. GREAT. |
| On April 7th 2009 xodex Said: |
| very cool. i like the unique style! the combination of poetic rhyme and prose is very well done. =) |
| On April 7th 2009 MCRsLover Said: |
| so this is really just like from a girl's point of view. her boyfriend made her popular and made ppl like her,
but when he left her everyone she thought was her friend left her, too. |
