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about someone i love......... :)

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Created: 03/09 2009
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Category: Love

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Is it So?

Stop All Together.

I haven't slept in forever.
I just want time
To stop all together.
And look at me
(Look at me).
I can't even breathe.
And I know
That you can't see.
I tried to beat you
And all I got
Was regret.
How could I
Possibly forget?
He loves you...
And you love him, too.
How can I
Live with that?
How could you
Have wanted that?
I wanted you to be happy,
And I guess
I got what I wished for.
But I can't take anymore.
He didn't help me.
And I know
I can't make him see.
How can I just let it be?
I'm sitting here
On the edge of forever.
And all I want to do
Is make time
Stop all together.
Look at me...
I still can't breathe.
Maybe if I die...
Then I could sleep.

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On May 8th 2009 Blueeyedgirl92 Said: 
Blueeyedgirl92 this is really good! i like it a lot.
On March 11th 2009 MCRsLover Said: 
MCRsLover :D thank u guys so much!
On March 10th 2009 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Awesome poem! :)
On March 9th 2009 elvira2196 Said: 
elvira2196 wow.. this by far is the most saddest poem I have yet read because I can relate to it so much. You are a great writer. Nicely Done.